when you mentioned the white grand piano, i couldn't help remembering this song;
it's funny to think that i told my friend to start writing once a week (because she wants to improve), and the first thing she writes about is music (this was last night.)
ANYWAY, i have to say i love your writing. ): this seemed less poetry-like, which is really nice in a different way. austin sounds like a beautiful character, and aislinn is a really unique name - i've never heard of it before. i'm not really making much sense, but i loved this all of your other writing. :) keep writing original~
Oh wow... I love it. It's beautiful... T_T It's sad and my heart breaks but it's beautiful and it's like I can see the story unfold in front of me as I read it... And the picture... Everything's beautiful.
Your writings takes my breath away...
"when you grow up austin, when you grow up, don't ever dye your dark dark hair. when you grow up austin, promise me that you won't break anyone's heart just because they love you so much that you can. austin, austin, when you grow up and i'm in the sky, don't cry for me, okay?"
"when you grow up austin, i want you to know, you'll break someone's heart anyways, but tell them. tell of the sky and how you'll be forever so that they don't miss you as much. and austin, when you grow up, i want you to follow your dreams, no matter how hard it is, because nothing else matters."
"so austin, when you grow up, just think of it as, you're saving me as i'm in the sky." - I dunno why... But this is my favorite part.
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it's funny to think that i told my friend to start writing once a week (because she wants to improve), and the first thing she writes about is music (this was last night.)
ANYWAY, i have to say i love your writing. ): this seemed less poetry-like, which is really nice in a different way. austin sounds like a beautiful character, and aislinn is a really unique name - i've never heard of it before. i'm not really making much sense, but i loved this all of your other writing. :)
keep writing original~
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Your writings takes my breath away...
"when you grow up austin, when you grow up, don't ever dye your dark dark hair. when you grow up austin, promise me that you won't break anyone's heart just because they love you so much that you can. austin, austin, when you grow up and i'm in the sky, don't cry for me, okay?"
"when you grow up austin, i want you to know, you'll break someone's heart anyways, but tell them. tell of the sky and how you'll be forever so that they don't miss you as much. and austin, when you grow up, i want you to follow your dreams, no matter how hard it is, because nothing else matters."
"so austin, when you grow up, just think of it as, you're saving me as i'm in the sky." - I dunno why... But this is my favorite part.
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