A Story Chapter 9

[dearwriter]

Name: A Story
Summary: The Writer finds the main character in reality
Chapter 9: Dreams [I promised I'll talk about KyuSaeng now, so yeah...]
WARNING: Some crying. Yeah, let's get Young Saeng to cry for lying about forgetting his dreams! >:D Er, maybe not. Instead, this is a warning to those who are expecting sad scenes and kissing scenes, because

Comments

[evaa_x3]

Okay, i'm not trying to be rude or anything. Honestly, I'm not.
But some of your word tenses are off.
And some of the scenes seem a bit rushed. as if i could say anything about that. >>; My stories are just as rushed and sometimes even worse.
And i mean rushed as sort of coincidental. But only some of the scenes. ><

i'll shut up now. Sorry.

[dearwriter]

You know, I'm like, as excited as the reader xD
Maybe I should write out the ideas in my head to stop it from thinking about other ideas. [I usually get things like this when I read some fanfics {especially when it's abusive, lol}]
And that helps me focus on what I should try and fix [my friend was right! I do need to practice <.<]. Am trying my best, just don't know when it's good enough D:
Thanks for reading, and commenting. ^^

[ss501fan]

my favourite couple, kyusaeng. but my other fave couple, minjoon :)
kinda was.. expecting more from.. the hotel scene..
HAA. just kidding! yerrrrrr~ hoo hoo..

ahem, anyway, yeah, i'm like a speed reader :)
can't wait for more! :D

[dearwriter]

I also read my own story xD
Finished it in probably an hour and 30 minutes?
Read my first story and its sequel xD
I wish I can ACTUALLY write more in hotel scenes... sorry xD
Oh well.

[blue_panda26]

KYAAAAAAAAA
soooo excited to read next chapter~