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dearygirl

Still Fighting It

May 02, 2010 22:27

Title: Still Fighting It
Pairing: Jeff/Annie
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Shirtless Jeff
Word Count: 1645
Spoilers: 1.22 Art of Discourse
Note: Annie and Jeff clean up after the food fight. Title comes from the Ben Folds song of the same name.

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dearygirl June 15 2010, 07:12:42 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed.

amtrak12 June 14 2010, 18:03:50 UTC

Just re-watched this ep and immediately had to go track down this fic again to make it all better. lol Shame on me for not commenting the first time!

Love this! Their whole conversation about maturity and stuff was just so them. Jeff always has his 'real' conversations with Annie which I love! (Oh he sometimes has a 'real' moment with Pierce too)

Favorite parts:

It was then Annie noticed that Jeff seemed to have taken off his shirt. Which meant of course that he was shirtless. Without his shirt on. Again. In front of her. Dammit.

And when Jeff said these things and he looked at her like that - something she could feel in her toes - she couldn’t help but want to laugh and cry and run to find all the people she went to high school with so she could yell, “See! Everything’s okay!”

Maybe one day it would all just feel normal.

^That one especially made me go "Oh Annie!" and made me want to give her a great big hug.

Also loved:

She mentally tossed away her own college bucket list. It didn't really seem to matter anymore. Everything ( ... )

dearygirl June 15 2010, 07:13:42 UTC

Thank you! I adore specific comments like yours. I'm so pleased that you enjoyed it!

0penhearts January 8 2011, 10:54:46 UTC

What? I'm not rereading the Library of Shannon even though I'm SO SLEEPY and should totally be in bed but cannot make myself stop reading because I forgot how fun and happy and adorable and flirty and great this all is.

I don't know what you're talking about.

It was then Annie noticed that Jeff seemed to have taken off his shirt. Which meant of course that he was shirtless. Without his shirt on. Again. In front of her. Dammit.

What right did he have to even have those kinds of arms?

TEEHEE. This is what my inner monologue sounds like when I see shirtless Joel/Jeff. No intelligent thought whatsoever.