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dearygirl

Depth Perception 3/3

Jun 15, 2010 04:50

Title: Depth Perception
Pairing: Jeff/Annie, ensemble
Word Count: 3726
Ratings/Warnings: PG-13, leaning into R
Spoilers: Season 1
Disclaimer: I do not own Community or these characters, oh but Dan Harmon I love you for life.
Description: Annie and Jeff’s relationship - what the group sees, and more importantly, what they don’t.
Author’s Note: ( Read more... )

community, depth perception, fanfiction, jeff/annie

Comments 51

lilyayl June 16 2010, 03:27:08 UTC

I don't know which prompt started this, but I am so very glad that it did. This is a wonderful story with some excellent scenes. I really like how you have everyone interact here. The reveal scene was probably one of my favorites, all three of them (top of chapter one, the one where the group starts to figure it out, and the official reveal). I also like how Annie counts the kisses, always expecting this one to be the last. This was a great read; thanks.

dearygirl June 17 2010, 00:10:01 UTC

I think it was the "Secret Relationship" prompt that started it. The original draft was a lot more focused on that aspect.

And thank you for the comment! I'm glad you like it!

webeh June 16 2010, 04:26:40 UTC

That was hot. Especially the almost boots-knocking on the pool table. I kinda love how no one in the study group seems to notice the pairing until they stop interacting with eachother. Just like on the show. :)

dearygirl June 17 2010, 00:10:56 UTC

Thank you so much! The pool table scenes was one of the first ones I wrote and I'm pleased with it so I'm glad you enjoyed it too! Thank you.

tattooedsiren June 16 2010, 05:33:17 UTC

That was so awesome. Really in character and well written and gripping. Amazing work.

dearygirl June 17 2010, 00:11:07 UTC

Thank you so much!

midnitecruiser June 16 2010, 05:46:09 UTC

"...apparently I am incapable of writing anything short."

I wouldn't have it any other way. Fic in abundance is the best kind of fic.

Thanks for writing this. :)

dearygirl June 17 2010, 00:12:38 UTC

Fic in abundance is the best kind of fic

Very true.

Thank you so much for the comment!

crackers4jenn June 16 2010, 06:37:01 UTC

Ahhhhhhhhhh, this might be my new favorite story. Seriously and for real, I can't even handle how solidly it's connected TO MY SOUL.

Like everyone else it seems, I started out with the intent to c/p all of my favorite lines, but I realized not even halfway through the first part that, well, I would be quoting EVERYTHING back at you.

The first section--after Troy and Abed spot Annie and Jeff? God, that was amazing. It was like some brilliant 'shipper manifesto, proving all over again just WHY Jeff and Annie work. It's not just a case of the two actors having a crazy amount of chemistry. It's how Jeff and Annie have grown more than just about any of the other characters. And how, every step of the way, they are changing and evolving together. I LOVE THAT.

And I love, too, your POV. It wasn't just a Jeff POV or an Annie POV, it was an Everyone POV. That is SO BRILLIANT, I can hardly stand it.

The ensemble-y fun! Really, this part made me smile so much:

It’s the last weekend before school starts again and they’ve all holed ( ... )

dearygirl June 17 2010, 00:17:16 UTC

THANK YOU!!!

SO HILARIOUS. The comedic timing of it was absolutely insane.

OMG, coming from you this is a compliment indeed. THANK YOU. THANK YOU.

Why is that doing weird things to my heart? I don't know!

The group being awesome together is one of my favorite things. It does something to my heart too. I want their little community.

I am really SO glad that you enjoyed it. Thank you for the lovely comment.