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Jul 09, 2010 01:06

Pairing: Jeff/Annie, Britta/Everyone, ensemble
Word Count: 6209
Rating/Warnings: PG-13 for language
Spoilers: Season One
Description: Graduation 2013, complete with flashbacks to the past four years.
Disclaimer: I do not own Community. Community owns me.

Author’s Note: Fic Exchange Gift for rashaka  (Prompt: kissing ( Read more... )

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amtrak12 July 9 2010, 18:59:41 UTC
*dies*

I'm not even sure there are words for how amazing this entire thing is. Just GUH! *dies again* My heart! And the flashbacks, and the 'present day', and the ending with the finale kiss. And Britta being AWESOME and Jeff and Annie debating over whether Abed or Troy is better for Britta and then deciding that they both made sense - I flailed so hard there. XD Basically HOLY FREAKING COW THIS STORY IS AMAZING!!!!!

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dearygirl July 13 2010, 01:18:41 UTC
Thank you so much! I am so glad you enjoyed it.

I LOVE Britta and I love her with Troy AND Abed so that was a lot of fun to play with.

Thank you for reading and commenting!

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solsty July 9 2010, 20:39:57 UTC
Pretty f****** awesome, that's what this is. I loved how you ended it with the finale kiss and well, it's just overall fantastic, witty, plausible and cute.

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dearygirl July 13 2010, 01:20:14 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked the finale kiss at the end. Ending up there was part of my original intent with this thing so I'm happy it seemed to work.

Thank you for reading!

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veritas724 July 9 2010, 20:44:40 UTC
Every SINGLE time Jeff and Annie had a ~moment~, I started feeling all weird and giddy just like when I watch the actual episodes. How do you make things so poignant and light at the same time? I felt like I was fighting tears and laughing hysterically the entire time!

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dearygirl July 13 2010, 01:25:40 UTC
THANK YOU! I feel like there's such a beautiful aspect to Jeff and Annie's relationship already there that I just try to capture what's there. Like their interactions are about so much more than the chemistry (which of course is there in spades) and they just connect with each other on a level that no one else in the group does. It makes me giddy just to write them.

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for reading.

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bavalon18 July 10 2010, 00:11:27 UTC
Oh my God... epic. I think I'll have to read it again to give any specific feedback other than my favorite "throwaway" part is that Jeff mentions men in capes while Britta leaves a message on Annie's voicemail in like, part 3 but we don't find out what that means until 5b.

Wonderful, wonderful job.

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dearygirl July 13 2010, 01:26:59 UTC
Yay! I'm so glad people are noticing those little details I threw in there. It was so much fun to weave some of these strings along through the entire story.

Thank you SO much for reading!

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mllemoony July 10 2010, 00:55:58 UTC
Aw, this was great! And very well-plotted. I'm always kind of wary when fics have Jeff declaring his love for someone, but this was totally organic. I loved it!

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dearygirl July 13 2010, 01:29:17 UTC
Thank you!

I'm always wary of it too and I try to stay away things being super saccharine because I can't see Jeff and Annie (Jeff especially) being like that so I'm so glad you thought this worked.

Thank you for reading!

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