Lift

Jul 28, 2010 01:34

Pairing: Jeff/Annie
Word Count: 2216
Spoilers: Season One
Warnings/Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: I do not own Community. Community owns me. True story.
Author’s Note: Written for ljubavirakija 's Ficcy Friday prompt “Annie and Jeff stuck in a camera-less elevator.”
Thanks muchly to my trusty beta 0penhearts

So, okay, this is basically the smuttiest thing I’ve ever written. ( Read more... )

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spottedpenguin July 28 2010, 22:22:24 UTC
Holy Hell. This review would be longer, but I have to go find me a boyfriend and an elevator, like, now.

And I agree with everyone else...Married!Wingers sex is the best. It helps that they're so perfectly in character...her stubbornly repeating her argument over & over, him only half-listening and stubbornly refusing to apologize.

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dearygirl July 29 2010, 05:29:20 UTC
Haha! Let me know if you have any luck. Found myself an elevator but the boyfriend thing is more complicated. Sigh.

And thank you! I'm so glad you felt like they were in character. It's hard to imagine them sometimes in the future and how they'll be more mature but still "them".

I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

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thebluecheat July 28 2010, 23:05:49 UTC
I want to know what they were fighting about!

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dearygirl July 29 2010, 05:31:58 UTC
Aww, I'm sorry. I left it vague because I didn't want to get too bogged down in that. In my head Annie was planning some kind of event and she had put Jeff in charge of something simple like music or beverages and he had just completely blown it off or forgotten.

But I hope you enjoyed it anyway!

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dearygirl July 29 2010, 05:33:00 UTC
Yay! I'm so glad you liked it. It was a really fun prompt.

And, might I say, your icon is the HOTNESS.

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dearygirl August 1 2010, 05:25:56 UTC
Oh goodness, that would definitely be squee-worthy. I vote for this to happen. Soon.

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chrisfaithalin July 29 2010, 06:36:54 UTC
Wow...just wow. Let's just get it out of the way, that was some hot sex and you did a great job writing it.

A more subtle thing I liked about this story was that you didn't give away what the fight was about. The way you wrote it, you conveyed the perfect marital spat. I loved that they just didn't fall over each other to apologize either. Really great!

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dearygirl August 1 2010, 05:44:41 UTC
Oh thank you so much! I'm glad you liked the fight. Annie and Jeff are both such stubborn people that I feel like this is how a lot of their fights would play out... maybe not necessarily all ending up with sex in an elevator though lol.

Thank you again for reading and commenting!

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judykim97 July 29 2010, 13:45:32 UTC
One of my new all-time faves! Don't have words to describe how much I loved it. Hot. Perfect. Love that they're married. :)

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dearygirl August 1 2010, 05:26:26 UTC
Yay! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading!

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