Discretion (4/?)

Nov 15, 2010 12:23

Pairing: Jeff/Annie
Spoilers: Through 2.04
Word Count: 716
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I do not own Community.
Description: Missing moment from Basic Rocket Science
Author's Note:0penhearts  = BEST BETA EVER

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eleventhimpala November 15 2010, 20:55:27 UTC
This was my favorite one so far.

Sweet and simple. :)

I can't wait for more!

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dearygirl November 16 2010, 07:16:16 UTC
Thank you so much!

I already have the next chapter partially written so it shouldn't take too much longer.

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moeexyz November 15 2010, 22:45:44 UTC
This was really sweet.

I love the way you write it so simply but manage to put so much subtext to everything. That's sort of what their entire relationship is like. Simple with a lot of subtext, and you capture it beautifully.

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dearygirl November 16 2010, 07:18:21 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad the subtext works here because I wanted this to just be a quiet moment where they simply understand each other. That's kind of what I love about Annie and Jeff.

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treblebeth November 16 2010, 02:56:19 UTC
I really love these. The feeling in this one is so great, almost dream-like. So very sweet.

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dearygirl November 16 2010, 07:18:41 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed.

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lunamystik November 16 2010, 03:04:12 UTC
What a wonderful way of bringing up the summer. And what a wonderful, simple moment between two people who are, despite everything else, friends.

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dearygirl November 16 2010, 07:20:39 UTC
Thank you!

Yeah, their friendship is the most important thing here. I feel like, within the group they have the second best friendship (after Troy and Abed, because really, how do you beat that?) and I really like to play that up.

Thank you again for all the awesome comments!

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lapacifidora November 16 2010, 03:09:46 UTC
The faint sound of crickets fills the air all around them and it’s long moment before either of them speaks again.

The convenience of living in sitcom world.

Because this little bubble of security we had built around ourselves burst at the beginning of the year and I feel like it’s my fault. And I feel like everyone else thinks it’s my fault. And maybe I really would like at least one part of my life not to be a complete joke.

Bingo. I think amtrak112 said her boyfriend said that Annie is the Britta this season, and Annie's thoughts here nail that perfectly.

I agree with everyone else: This one was beautifully put together. :)

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dearygirl November 16 2010, 07:22:53 UTC
Bingo. I think amtrak112 said her boyfriend said that Annie is the Britta this season, and Annie's thoughts here nail that perfectly.

SO TRUE. Annie's definitely taken a bit of a beating this season. Which does suck because she's maybe my favorite character and I want to punch anyone that hurts her but if it's ACTUALLY going somewhere on the show then it could be an interesting thing.

And thank you again for the lovely comments!

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