Pairing: Annie/Jeff, brief Annie/Troy
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: Through 2.11
Word Count: 5,197
Disclaimer: Don’t own it. Never have. Probably never will. Oh, but I love it so.
Description: Annie and Jeff spend Christmas together.
Author’s Note: ACK! This definitely didn’t get up by the New Year. I am so sorry for the delay. But I hope you enjoy and Merry
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Everything was cute, and adorable, and Christmassy, and wonderful.
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This is such a sweet ending to the story - it makes my tooth ache a little, but in a perfect, Christmas-y sort of way. I loved all the funny bits with the rest of the cast as well (Pierce! Troy! Garret!).
“Oh. Just here for the holidays. I’m from Corpus Cristi actually. Texas. Population 286,000. I attended Richard King High School. Our mascot was the Mustang.”
“That’s. Specific.”
Made me laugh out loud. :)
And I kind of love Caroline Decker - I have this whole epic Annie-gets-a-job-as-Caroline story in my head that will probably never be written, but I find her playing that character so interesting and different, and yet still quintessentially Annie.
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1) You write Jeff so well. And that's really difficult to do because I feel like you have to get this right mix of snarky and heart, but somehow you manage to do that.
2) You write Annie so well. You've got her personality pegged and it's adorable to read about things like her making dollar bill-themed Christmas cookies, and forcing Jeff to go to IHOP the day after Christmas.
3) You write every other character so perfectly - Pierce, Garrett, Troy, Abed, and yes even the checkout woman at the grocery store. I think that the best part is that you follow the Golden Rule of Writing - "show, don't tell."
4) This has staked its claim as my go-to Christmas J/A fic, and I love it, and I want it to be scarf-wearing weather already.
Flawless fic. Off to read some more of your stuff! ;)
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Thanks again for reading!
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