let me kiss you on your neck (make your heart stop)

[dearygirl]

~*~*~

They end up in his bed.

Turns out, the couch is too small and somehow, a few hours after they fall asleep, Jeff crashes onto the floor, tangled in the blanket and cursing as his head smacks into the coffee table.

Annie blinks into the darkness, half-asleep and confused.

“Jeff?” she murmurs. There’s an answering groan and her

Comments

[wander_lust_79]

really nice, intimate and sweet!!

[dearygirl]

I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you!

[dearygirl]

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! It was actually really fun to write this one and get into Annie's head where she would be calm and yet totally freak-out and exhilarated.

Thank you for the comment!

[crittab]

I feel... breathless. It's the only way I can describe it. This is the perfect description of the perfect moment.

[stephanierb]

This feedback is way overdue, but I'm always late with these things.

I'm relatively new to Community fandom, and J/A, and your stories were some of the first that I read, and ones I go back to again and again. The characterization, the atmosphere, the story...everything about your writing is superb. You have a wonderful grasp of the characters and the Jeff/Annie relationship, and you always manage to come up with these scenarios that match the tone of the show so perfectly. I always feel like I'm getting more "Community" when I read your stories.

Anyway, terrific work. I hope we get to see more from you soon.

[blithers]

*hums*

So, I'm browsing around absent-mindedly, and I'm all like, I wonder if dearygirl ever posted the story she said she was working on? Maybe I missed it one day - wouldn't that be a treat. So I browse on over to to your website and then I'm like, "Oh, hey, look, a story from APRIL. How did I miss this? Wait. NC-17? What? Jeff/Annie that's been just waiting for me to read it? WHAT IS THIS."

Apparently the answer to that question is, this is amazing.

Because, seriously, this is just so lovely and so sexy. The details here are so rich and sensual and down-to-earth, and Annie's voice is so drowsy and then hyper-aware of every little thing.

His arm stays draped over her and in his sleep his fingers twitch and kind of twist into the hemline of her shirt.

Mmm.

Gorgeous, lovely job. <3 I'm so glad I found this after all this time!

[dearygirl]

Yay! I kind of adore getting comments on things that I posted awhile ago so when I got the notification for this one it made me smile. A lot. And I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you for the comment, and the smile. :)