and we were tired of being mild

May 13, 2010 22:23

Title: and we were tired of being mild
Pairing: Jeff/Annie
Spoilers: Through 1.23, “Modern Warfare”
Rating/ Warning: PG-13
Word Count: 4938
Disclaimer: I do not own Community, any of the characters or the epicness of this episode.
Author’s Note: Written for the “Modern Warfare” Jeff/Annie Rewrite challenge. Everything is basically the same through the ( Read more... )

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under_crisis June 28 2010, 16:35:46 UTC
Wow. Just wow. Because you kept it believable, and sweet. *daydreams of gallant!Jeff*

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0penhearts January 8 2011, 11:15:48 UTC
So, did you know you'd basically written the study room showdown scene in Conspiracy Theories? BECAUSE YOU TOTALLY DID DUDE.

He stared at her for a moment, forehead creased and now she was seeing concern and oh God, maybe even… But she needed to be pissed right now. She needed to hold onto that anger. It was the only thing that was going to get her through this moment, hurdle her past crippling embarrassment.

Jeff grabbed his guns and reached for the door, looking resigned. “Annie, I’m sorry.”
I mean, GEEZ. It's like they wrote that paragraph in the SCRIPT!

Also, Janie's Got a Gun?! TOO MUCH. I SEE YOU CREPPIN', DAN HARMON. I AM THE WITNESS TO YOUR CREEPERY.

Oh my god I just formed that sentence. I need to go to bed.

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dearygirl January 9 2011, 03:43:50 UTC
Hee. I hadn't noticed that before.

So. Either Dan's CREEPIN' on us or we are SO IN SYNC WITH THE SHOW WE CAN'T HELP BUT FORETELL THESE MOMENTS. Pepper spray anyone?

I AM THE WITNESS TO YOUR CREEPERY.

THIS SENTENCE IS AWESOME.

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