guess what we'll discover (4/11)

Oct 12, 2011 10:20

Pairing: Jeff/Annie
Spoilers: None
Word Count: 4229
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Description: Jeff gets a new roommate
Author’s Note: Okay, I absolutely did not mean for it to take so long to update this. But there was a pesky writer's block issue that I hope I'm over now. As always, my eternal gratitude to 0penhearts for the beta and the demands to keep ( Read more... )

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hafthand October 13 2011, 00:47:32 UTC
More more more more more we need more! This is amazing.

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dearygirl October 19 2011, 20:37:46 UTC
More is on its way!!!

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poppypickle October 13 2011, 01:30:20 UTC

I love this story so much. Another wonderful chapter.

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dearygirl October 19 2011, 20:37:24 UTC
Thank you so much!!!

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stephanierb October 13 2011, 02:31:48 UTC

Aww, they're so domesticated! I love that they've developed this routine and they've become so accustomed to being in one another's living space.

He stops throwing them away and starts sticking them to random spots on the fridge so that soon it’s covered with fluorescent post-its in various shades that flutter whenever the door’s opened or closed.

I love this! And it's something I could totally see Annie doing. I like to think she started coming up with completely random messages after she ran out of greetings. :-)

“I guess I’ll call and cancel the bouncy castle,” she sighs loudly.

Jeff arches an eyebrow. “That better be sarcasm.”

“Oh. You still want the bouncy castle?” She grins.

LOL That was awesome.

Annie/Abed bonding time! And poor Annie being Abed's lab rat. Though I laughed at the idea of Abed jotting down Annie's emotional reactions to that movie. And that is a tear-jerker.

The pair on the couch jerk awake, blinking in surprise ( ... )

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dearygirl October 19 2011, 21:10:01 UTC
I find Jeff to be a really fascinating character because as much as I think he pushes Annie away because she's young and naive and vulnerable and maybe he doesn't want to corrupt her, I think he's also terrified of getting hurt himself. And even more terrified now that he's spending more and more time with her and real feelings are developing. This is definitely going to play into the remaining chapters.

And again, thank you for reading and leaving such awesome comments!

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carenicoleiq October 14 2011, 04:28:43 UTC
I just found this and am completely loving it. You do a great job hitting the characters dead on. I can actually see this all playing out in my mind. I can't wait to read more of this and hope to do so soon!

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dearygirl October 19 2011, 20:38:47 UTC
Yay! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Hopefully it won't be too long until I can get another chapter posted.

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blithers October 14 2011, 05:52:17 UTC
Oh, Abed.

I feel like I should re-read this chapter with a big slice of chocolate Jeffcake and a cold glass of milk. <3

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dearygirl October 19 2011, 20:39:49 UTC
I've decided that Jeff-cake is indeed the best kind of cake.

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