DBSK Fic #1.4: Anata no Memory Chapter 4

[deathbyaccident]

Title : Anata no Memory(chaptered)
Parts: Chapter 4/15 + Epilogue
Pairing : [DBSK Fandom] JaeChun at prologue. Oh wait, don't run away! JaeHo, of course.
Rating : PG, drama, AU
Author : Randix
Disclaimer : No, the boys belong to themselves. I'm just a poor writer.
Summary : /AU/ How on earth will Yunho and Jae Joong find themselves together, when

Comments

[ladydusk_raku]

OH. WOW...
This is intense,truly intense and beautifully written. O_O Such great drama, realistic and just simply awesome. I truly love everything thats going on here with the writing. Gah, all the heartbreak that I'm seeing. Joongie is having bombs dropped onto him, and Yunho's having troubles of the heart. Meanwhile Yoochun is oblivious to his 'loves' plight. Oh how crazy and sad =(

So well done, I love the last part with tying in that beeeeep of the phone in with a heart monitor stopping from a dead heartbeat. This is so good. Great job.

:D

[deathbyaccident]

Ah, your comments really made me feel happy. For some odd reason, I like this best: Oh how crazy and sad =(Thanks for reading, my dear! *gives you JaeHo cookies* I'm glad you liked the last line too. XD

[uknowandiknow]

HOMYGOSH. i mean like really HOMYGOSH.

my heart aches like really badly now. cos the whole jae 'anguish' scene was just soooo overwhelming. and yunho's not enjoying the whole thing either. man...*cries**

and even though i get annoyed (slightly only k, it used to be worse. HEH) when i see jaechun you made me FEEEL for jaechun in this chapter. gosh. and chun has NO CLUE whatsoever bout what's going on. oh dear oh dear. is jae gonna tell him or reject him then he'll get it on with su oh my spectualation spectulation. HEE.

oh yeah just asking, how long are you planning to make this story?

OH and i wanna tell you, dont be too hard on yourself over your mids yes? and well, dont let the fic overrule your studies i guess. NO pressure to update. XD

and even though i cant wait for your next update. i'll be patient and kind and blahblahblah. HEE. OH YES! ask dr song if you and i can be his god-daughters k, well, after all you're in 'direct contact' to him. hee.

overall this is a pretty good chapter, well like everything before, LOVEEE! <3

[deathbyaccident]

Thanks for reading dearie! ♥ Hmm, I think this story will have around 15 chapters, plus an epilogue. So that's like. . .about 10 chapters more to go. ^_^

Waah, thanks for that bit about my midterms. Actually, I do try to keep RL above stuff, but sometimes the JaeHo-loving is just too much, lol. Plus, your comments really make me want to write more. Thank you, thank you! *bows*

And so, I talked to Dr. Song and yes, we can now officially be godsisters, yeah! Haha. (God, which crack am I on?) O_O

Thanks for reading and leaving a wonderful comment, my dear! Much love! ♥

[crystaldee]

O GOD O GOD O GOD...........
I'm speecheless...I don't know what to say!!!!!!!!
Jae...nooooooo....

I know that I was prepared for this...
But I never thought it could be this hard to read the scene where
Yunnie break the news about the WHD to Jae...
Esp where Jae start to think about death and how he couldn't watch JunSu's
soccer match...who fetch Chunnie in the airport..
Goodness....

IF Chunnie's the one who starts the affair...
I dunnow what to say...
He'll be the death of Jae faster than the WHD...
But then...I want Jae wo be with Yunnie..
Kakakakkakaka....

Goodness...
I really really reallly REALLY CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT PART!!!!!!!
<33333
LOVE LOVE!!!!!!! ^___^

[deathbyaccident]

Thanks for reading, hun! I will try my best not to give anybody so much heartache (although Yunnie's getting really sadder now, isn't he? ^_^;;) I hope you'll be able to read my next updates too!

Much love to you! *gives you cookies*

[weird_purple]

OMGGG~!!!!! <3 <3
one more great writer here~!!!! <3 <3 <3
I love the way you wrote this...
it's so realistic and... just GREAT~!!!

aaah.... jaejoong finally knew about his WHD... >_____<

this chapter is so angsty... T____T
I cried and my heart twisted badly all the way reading this... T____T
especially when jaejoong think about his future and when chunnie proposed joongie...

please don't stop writing this fanfic!!!
FIGHTING!!!! update soon!!!
post more soon!!! XDD
please pretty please... <3 <3 <3

[deathbyaccident]

Wow, thank you. Your comment really made me happy. :) Ah, I'm sorry if this is too angsty for you *hugs you* I hope that made you feel better. XD Yep, will be updating soon as well.

Thank you again! weird_purple, FIGHTING! ♥

[vrilly]

I am so late. GRRR.

[vrilly]

Gosh, you write really well and this part had so much drama and <333333...please do update soon or I will be left wondering about this story. Been looking forward to it and stalking your journal *hides* before I added you.... I like Jaechun, Jaeho and Yoosu...!
So sorry that I'm practically rambling here. But I remember you saying you're not too sure how it will all work out.. DON'T ABANDON WRITING! I know you'll come out with something good. <3333

[vrilly]

*Hugs to yOu* don't be down over the midterms!!!!

[deathbyaccident]

Awwww. You're so adorable! *hugs you* Thank you, that was really encouraging! Comments like yours really make me want to write more. *hugs you reeeeally tight!*

Oh and um um um, I've been looking forward to the next update for your Obsession fic.

Thanks for reading ne! Much loves! <3