DBSK Fic #1.7: Anata no Memory Chapter 7

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Title : Anata no Memory(chaptered)
Parts: Chapter 7/15 + Epilogue
Pairing : [DBSK Fandom] JaeChun at prologue. Oh wait, don't run away! JaeHo, of course.
Rating : PG, drama, AU
Author : Randix
Disclaimer : No, the boys belong to themselves. I'm just a poor writer.
Summary : /AU/ How on earth will Yunho and Jae Joong find themselves together, when

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[tyreling]

Yay~!

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... ahhh~! The opening killed me. I kept moving forward in my chair waiting for the bomb to drop when suddenly “YOOCHUN-HYUNG! I GOT THE ANSWER TO THAT DAMN NUMBER 25, I FINALLY GOT IT - ”. *falls over* Ahahaha. I love the opening. It seems like Yoochun and Junsu are getting cozier than ever. XDD Can't wait to hear more of them. :3 *cracks up* ahaha, and you mentioned the dolphin. Ahahaha, Junsu's laugh is so kyute~! Anyway, let's continue.
I "awww~!" at the nice Jaejoong spotting Yunho in an uncomfortable position. And then the phone call and Jaejoong pretending to sleep and <33 *heart heart* ARGH~! So kyute! Kyute! Kyute! Kyute! *squee squee*
Ahahah, I'm very amused with Jaejoong's reasonings in the middle even though he's actually in pain, angsting away and ahh~, T_T his leg. It wouldn't be able to work properly now... OMG! They're talking about ten years after; the future; kids; sons; name of the first son <333 LOVE~! LOVE~! And the name meanings ehehehe, are those canon meanings? *snickers* And the get-on-his-back scene. XDD I

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Neko-chan~! Thank you for reading and your comment, although this isn't really my reply. BUT LJ told me it's your birthday today? OMO. HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEARIE! *throws confetti* I hope you have a blast today~! Take care always!

Actually, I didn't know where and how to greet you, so I did it here instead. XD *does a Happy Birthday dance~*

[tyreling]

Thank you. :3 But you didn't have to worry too much about the wishing.

[irerd_taga]

Yes! You've updated!
I love this chapter, like I loved the previous ones.
Jae's random thoughts and the shouting scene at the lighthouse was funny.
But Jae's determination to break it off with Yoochun was heartbreaking! And Yunho is a dear for disregarding his own feelings to ensure Yoochun's is safeguarded.
Btw, it seems Yoochun and Junsu are getting along just fine now.

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Yep, they are, aren't they? I wonder what happened too, but then again that's left for the Yoosu version of AnM, I guess. :) Thanks for reading and liking this chapter, dear!

*gives you cookies*

[yourconfidante]

8DDDD! BRB

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“CHUNNIE-HYUNG!” Pause, “STOP,” Pause, “Stop jumping - no, stop hugging me - no stop jumping ANDHUGGINGMENOWICAN’T - ACK - BREATHE! Wait, stopstop! Wait we’re going to lose our balance NOwait! We’re going to hit the wall let me go wait your phone your phoneOWWW! CHUNNIE - !”

LOL, YOOCHUN HAS JUNSU AGAINST A WALL. 8DD♥ OOOh~ Did I just imply something dirty?

Yunho shook his head, giving out one huge sigh. “Jae Joong-ah, look. I think you -“

“One more word about not doing this and I swear I’m going to hit you.”

“- should just get on my back so we can reach the tower before Christmas.”

“YAHWhatdoyoumeangetonyourbackand - Wait, WHAT?”Awww, there was too many good jaeho parts that need to be mentioned, but I just hella loved that one... idek.. They're just so cute when they banter. :D♥ I was so freaking happy, then sad when Yunho admits his feelings for Jae but resolves not to do anything about it. *sigh* AND YAY, Jaejoong being all flustered around Yunho. I see the love~ ♥ The ending... made me die a little inside. D: YUNHO~ ;

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LOL, YOOCHUN HAS JUNSU AGAINST A WALL. Exactly my thoughts too! HOMG.

Thanks for liking this chapter, dear~! Actually I had a little trouble writing this one, coming from all those weeks of not writing. But I'm so glad I'm back, and I'm really glad that you're still with me in this chapter, aaahhh~! *hugs you tightly* I know, those two bantering are always adorable T_T and Yunnie is such a good hyung. *sigh*

*clings onto you forever too~* Campbell's, I love Campbell's! *makes soup for you and me* ♥

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*stands on lighthouse* I HOPE THIS FIC HAS A HAPPY ENDIIIIINGGGGG!!!!

more soon please ;__;!

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OMG. Your comment just made me want to cry. T_T

Thank you, I'm so happy you liked this chapter! *stands with shizzical on lighthouse* THANKS SHIZZICAL-DEEEAAARRRIIIIEEEE! ♥

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i'm just reserving myself a spot, because i'm always being interrupted by, again, very unappreciated people in my house.
So I'll be back for a nicer ....and longer (?) comment =3

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ok, I'm back... O_o"
tehe, great chapter, and it's making me cry more and more and more and more!!! !!!!
Anyway, I love how you make JaeJoong always happy. It would suck to read a sappy JaeJoong in stories like this...=[ And it's alreadi hard enough trying to read a Yunho trying to be strong for both himself and JaeJoong and their families. It must be really hard reading it, so I can imagine how much harder it is to write it. And I love the commical inserts here and there.
Also, where in the story did you have the signs * [insert word] whatever. Yeah, Junsu's witty line in X-Man! XD ? Or is just a joke? 'cause in the authors note, I've already seen two * of this.... O_o" lolz =3
gReat, I can't wait for the next chapter, and I had been expecting an angry and jealous Chunnie-ahh's phone call...but I guess, Changmin's not very good at telling someone some news....and he got neglected... O_o"
<3

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I like making JJ happy, because he's so pretty when he's happy ne~ :) So I try to put some humor here and there, so it wouldn't be so drama-heavy ^^;;

Here's the * [insert word] whatever part:

“ - c’mon! How many cups of coffee did you take? You’re overreacting.” Pause, “Yeah yeah. Love whatever*. Anyway, Hyung,” Yunho sounded like he bit back a laugh, “did you get a copy of the email I sent to Dr. Wilkins?. . . . ..”

I'm glad that you liked this chapter! I spent a few hours trying to figure out what to write about Changmin's phone call to Chunnie. But Junsu got Chunnie too busy >.< *pats angry Minnie* Maybe some things are better left unsaid, no? :) Thanks for reading again, dear! You made me smile really big! ♥