[XXXHolic] Look After You- Chapter One (Donuts)

[deathlessjuliet]

Title: Look After You
Author: Deathless Juliet
Rating: PG
Chapter: 1/?
Disclaimer: I don't own the boys, I'm just using them. ;) I also don't own The Fray song for which this title belongs to. >.>

My first Doumeki/Watanuki fanfiction!

SPOILERS FOR THE MOST RECENT CHAPTERS

Comments

[epicureal]

T.T It's unbearably cute in a way~! (That's a good thing :D) Oh Doumeki-chwan~!

[seizansha]

hmm... really like this, set up as a possible chapter 121^-~, and the near confession and near realization really work.

the last line confused me at first, but rereading i got it.(sorry slow on the up-take tonight)
overall, it's excellent for a first fic!

[von_questenberg]

Aww, pretty cute. ^__^ Thanks for sharing. *goes to sleep imaginging W/D snuggling*

[sozuki17]

Aww! Why'd he roll away? Roll back, Watanuki~! Roll back and cuddle! >3

This was very nicely written and I like how it opened. ^-~

[lampshadehat]

Wow, that was really lovely. Especially the last part, with the reference to the reoccuring "if anything ever happened to you" line. Very in-character and poignant. Good job. &hearts