[XXXHolic] Look After You- Chapter Two (Donuts)

[deathlessjuliet]

Title: Look After You
Author: Deathless Juliet
Rating: PG
Chapter: 2/?
Disclaimer: I don't own the boys, I'm just using them. ;) I also don't own The Fray song for which this title belongs to. >.>

My first Doumeki/Watanuki fanfiction!

SPOILERS FOR THE MOST RECENT CHAPTERS

If you missed it, Read Chapter One Here

Comments

[von_questenberg]

Ah, lovely! <3 I really like how you're taking this. It's very believable and sweet. Looking forward to the next chapter.

[lunargeography]

Wow, it seems that Doumeki is still more hurt than Watanuki. Might be just as well, as Watanuki is at his best when he's taking care of people! Really liked the interaction with Maru and Moro -- you captured the mix of childishness and otherworldly wisdom well. Watanuki matters a great deal to them, doesn't he?

And now I'm worried about Watanuki being attacked on the way home...

Thanks for sharing!

[konnie_chan]

I would love it if you continue this. I'm hooked! And there are parts of it that are just sexy for some reason. I really like this! One question, though. Where do you get your chapters? I am stuck with BWY scans and they are great but I think they're really behind. I can get Tsubasa elsewhere, but I like xXxHolic better!

[choonyeol]

I'm curious to see where that leads us to, exactly...
I really like how you handle canon recent events and play with them.
And your writing style is good^^

Keep writing!^^

[rusalkaz]

*grins* Yuuko-san the fangirl... XD Our boys just a need a little push in the right direction, eh? ^_~ I can't wait for more XDDDD