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SPN Fic: Back Seat Driver

May 13, 2011 10:58

Title: Back Seat Driver
Author: debbiel66
Characters: John, Dean, Sam, Bobby
Word Count: 7100
Genre: gen
Rating: R (language)
Warnings: Spoilers through 6X16; AU from that point on
Author's Notes: This story follows Clean Slate and Killing Time in my resurrected!John verse. It is not necessary to read those stories first, but it would probably be ( Read more... )

resurrected!john, fic, spn

Comments 114

callistosh65 May 13 2011, 18:10:55 UTC

Yay - first one here!! ::does happy resurrected!John dance::

Fabulous, me dear. As ever. he’s a hunter and spent a hundred years in Hell. There’s no way he’s going to puke over some inner ear malfunction. Heh. I love how you handled John here - champing at the bit to be his old self with his boys, but realizing there is so much more going on in their lives now. Having him observe them both from the backseat was a genius touch.

debbiel66 May 13 2011, 23:57:31 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it and so appreciate your input and insight...what would my "cadence" do without you? &hearts

The perspective is SO hard - let me tell you!

klutzy_girl May 13 2011, 18:20:40 UTC

Aww, great chapter. I'm glad the Winchesters worked through their issues, at least a little bit.

Are we going to get an Adam mention? It seems like Bobby kept that part from John.

Can't wait for the next part of this 'verse.

debbiel66 May 13 2011, 23:59:04 UTC

Bobby definitely left that little bit out about Adam... that is yet to come, for sure. Thank you so much for letting me know you'd like more... I have to admit being a little worn out after this one, but it's good to know there's interest. :)

embroiderama May 13 2011, 18:43:10 UTC

Oh wow, you do such a great job of showing how all of their rough edges don't quite fit together the right way anymore and how they're struggling to make it work.

debbiel66 May 14 2011, 00:00:05 UTC

They are definitely a puzzle that doesn't fit right now. So many rough edges... thank you so much for letting me know you thought this worked. Can definitely use the encouragement!

digitalwave May 13 2011, 19:14:42 UTC

Beautiful, sweetie! This 'verse is quickly becoming one of my happy places. :)

debbiel66 May 14 2011, 00:00:33 UTC

That just makes me so happy, I can't even say! &hearts

cordelia_gray May 13 2011, 19:25:19 UTC

Excellent chapter!

Love the three of them, circling around each other, pushing for dominance but also re-forging the bonds of love and loyalty. The Gordon Walker bit was great, too. I'm sure Bobby filled in the broad strokes, but there are so many little details that he doesn't know. You have their voices down so well, I can hear all of them saying this dialogue :)

debbiel66 May 14 2011, 04:33:18 UTC

Aw, thanks so much! I don't know...writing John is tough. He's the elephant in the room of Supernatural. He casts quite the long shadow, and I worry I'm not doing him justice. I'm so glad you think the dialogue works because I worry about that too.

Thanks so much for reading!