Fic: Onstermay

[debbiel66]

Title: Onstermay
Author: debbiel66
Characters: John, Dean, Sam, Bobby
Word Count: 7600
Genre: gen
Rating: R (language)
Warnings: Spoilers through 6X16; AU from that point on
Author's Notes: This story follows Clean Slate, Killing Time, and Backseat Driver in my resurrected!John verse. It is not necessary to read those stories first, but it would

Comments

[sadritsuka12]

OMG.... .. LOVE IT MAINLY OVER PROTECTIVE DEAN HE DOESN'T TRUST JOHN WITH HIS SAMMY.... AWWWWE LOVE IT

[debbiel66]

Aw, thanks! So glad you liked it! :-)

[vail_kagami]

Still in love with this 'verse!
I really felt with Sam here - it was obvious he didn't want to talk because he was embarrassed, but they left him no choice. I hate that!

John made me sad in this one by not knowing about Adam and his mom. He doesn't even know Sam and Dean know Adam existed. There's such a chasm between him and his boys.

Dean's fierce protectiveness continues to delight me!

[debbiel66]

I'm so glad you like the 'verse! I wouldn't worry to much about Sam though - I think he's pretty good at sticking up for himself and probably has been since he was little.

The whole Adam thing is just so incredibly sad. :+( I wonder what Show will do with that, if anything...

Thanks so much for reading! :)

[vail_kagami]

Oh, not that I think something like that is going to emotionally break Sam. It's more a case of "I've been in that situation just two days ago and it led to a really embarassing scene and that sucked!"

I really wonder what Show will do with Adam, too. One thing's pretty certain, though: John's never gonna know about it.

[roque_clasique]

Wow, that was such an awesome and satisfying installment to this awesome and satisfying 'verse. The part with the pig latin really had me choking up a bit -- I puzzled over it for a moment, because the language sounded familiar, and when I realized it was pig latin I grinned -- but then once I realized what it meant I got all misty-eyed. It's so awesome to see all the Winchesters together, even as fragmented as they are...

but oh man, that part where John asks about the ghouls... *shudder* That was heartbreaking and so intense.

Thanks for this! Love it so.

[debbiel66]

Yay, I'm so glad you read it and liked it! That just makes me happy.

By the way, your drive 'verse was the inspiration for my attempting a verse at all. I have no attention span and can't usually follow WIPs, but yours was a notable exception. Made me hope it was possible.

I kept thinking the title was going to give it all away, but it doesn't seem to have. Silly me...

Thanks so much! &hearts

[sandymg]

A happy day is this showing up in my flist. :D

So good.

I adore your John in this. He's spot on. Exactly as I'd imagine him being coming back befuddled and out of the loop. Everyone is in such perfect character. I adored the reveal at the end. The line that made them all tear up. Um. Yeah.

I would so love to see JDM again. Sigh. This slow, wandering, and insightful interpretation of that happening is so rewarding to read.

[debbiel66]

This slow, wandering, and insightful interpretation of that happening is so rewarding to read.

This is so good to hear because it's exactly what I was worried about... that the roundabout way wouldn't be satisfying at all, compared to a more traditional plot pyramid...something I've never been particularly good at.

Thanks so much for your reassurance - totally encouraging! &hearts

(Are you working on any projects at the moment?)

[sandymg]

I love this verse. I'm in the 'more please' camp for what it's worth. You set up the ultimate AU. I get that this feels concluded and can conclude here. But ... there's room for more. Your audience clearly is shouting encore :)

As to your query. Yeah. I'm *supposed* to be working on something. Sigh. Been blocked of late. Haven't added a word. I signed up for a J2 Meant to Be challenge. It sounded like cheesy fun. The mods took old Harlequin romances and used the descriptions as prompts. I claimed one. Only 3K minimum. Easy as pie. Right.

I take this super simple plot and decide to give Jared Asperger's Syndrome. So now I'm flippin' researching for days on end, etc. I reached about 25K words on the beast. So it's a big bang and not a tiny challenge anymore. And, it's not done. The deadline is end of September. I'm down to the final chapter, I think. It's still a heavy duty romance. But it got, um, complex. :) Not to mention life mirroring art -- I had a plotline of a same-sex wedding in NY. And now, hey, it's legal!

[debbiel66]

Writing blocks are hard... I spent my entire summer not writing. My oldest is leaving for college in four days, and it's been a little melancholy. Decided I needed to just force myself to write again, and this story appeared.

Maybe, I'll have some inspiration. I'm a little muddled with the advent of season 7 approaching... how do you do a parallel AU? I know people do it, but they are far more clever than I am.

You amaze me that you can come with 25K just like that. I seriously don't know how you do it. But yay, you're finally inflicting woes on Jared again! It's been a while, hasn't it? ;)

onsterMay

[auroramama]

Awww! So scary and touching by turns.

Wait, there's a verse? My cup runneth over!

Re: onsterMay

[debbiel66]

Hee, did you read this one first? There's definitely a verse, but I am not sure you need to read all, although it's probably helpful.

Hope you like the others as well! Thanks so much for the lovely feedback. :)