[Ficlet] #14

[debsk]

Title: Touch of God
Author: debsk
Claim: Minho/Taemin
Prompt: #14 - Heaven&Hell
Fandom: SHINee
Rating: PG
Word Count: 970
Summary: Taemin’s head is gone thanks to Jaejoong’s drink. With his second shot, he becomes sensations and feelings bottle inside useless skin, flesh and bones.
Notes/Warnings: This is an Alternative Universe with superpowers and

Comments

[debsk]

Spot for justangel

[justangel]

Oh bb, sorry I didn't comment sooner. I mostly go online on my hand-held and typing a comment on mobile phone is just pain in the ass >_<

Anywayyy...LOL I love how the seniors seem to play around with the new boys. Somehow it strongly reminds me of frat house and the pledge ritual.

And...
If Jaejoong’s drink is Hell, then Minho’s hand is Heaven.
God, I feel like marrying you over the statement. Like everybody had said here, it's PERFECT!!

And just like everybody else, I'm seriously curious about Yoochun's power and how prominent he seems to take part in SHINee. But I sort of get the notion that the revelation will also means a big bend in the plot so I'm just gonna sit patiently and waut :)))

[debsk]

Don't worry! I know how uncomfortable it is to use a mobile phone to reply or commenting!

Whenever I heard SM boys talking about pranks and their relationship with each other, I couldn't help but sense that frat house sensation. I like to try and show it in my fics ^^

Thank you so much! I haven't realized it was such good ending until I started receiving comments!

Yeah, Yoochun's power is important for more reasons that one. He is not the most powerful (that would be Yunho) but he is useful with what he does. I've so many ideas on my head for this AU!!

As always, thank you so much for reading and commenting ^^

[debsk]

Spot for mara_ciro

[mara_ciro]

What on earth were the DBSK boys planning to do? And what in the world is Yoochun's actual power? You got my attention.

If Jaejoong’s drink is Hell, then Minho’s hand is Heaven. This line wsa PERFECT.

[debsk]

DBSK is full of active, cunning boys xDDD Yoochun's power plays a part in what's to come, so I'll keep to myself that information for now ^^

Thank you so much for reading!

[a_life_defiant]

If Jaejoong’s drink is Hell, then Minho’s hand is Heaven.

guh. O_O BEAUTIFUL.

seriously. but damn, Yoochun almost killed Taemin with his emotions.

So interesting that the boys make sparks when they touch. I wonder if it's all the time, or just when drinking?

great update bb!

♥

[debsk]

Thank you ^_^

Yoochun is not used to having a Psion around, poor boy. It was completely unintentional ^^

xDDDD (I'm so silly! I want to answer that but I can't because that'd be spoiler!! LOL)

♥♥

[yunho]

Shit this was amazing, idek what to say, but the way you described everything was beautiful omg \o/
Thank you for sharing!

[debsk]

Thank you so much!!

I still have lots to work on, but I'm trying ^_^

[debsk]

Yoochun is one of the strongest people inside SM, and that could apply for all five members of DBSK but, Yoochun is specially useful. And that's what I can say for now.

Thank you so much! I think I've found a way to get internet so, maybe, I'll post earlier than expected!!