[Ficlet] #38

Aug 26, 2011 18:04

Title: Colours
Author: debsk
Claim: Minho/Taemin
Prompt: #38 - Beautiful Disaster
Fandom: SHINee
Rating: NR-17
Word Count: 998
Summary: The room changes into a psychedelic amalgam of oranges and yellows that threaten to swallow Taemin and Minho.
Notes/Warnings: This is an Alternative Universe with superpowers and mentions of much more people than the ( Read more... )

shinee, 2min, fic

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debsk August 26 2011, 16:21:31 UTC
Spot for justangel

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justangel August 26 2011, 17:57:00 UTC
ASDFGHKLRDRKSRKNDEFUCKYEAHSMUT!!!

BE RIGHT BACK AFTER THE UNFF!!

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justangel August 26 2011, 18:16:16 UTC
FFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUU----------

WHAT IS TTHIS I DONT EVEN--WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO MEE!!!!!! OMG, I WISH THIS IS 10000WORDS LONG COS THERE JUST.NOT.ENOUGH.HOTNESS. AND DAMN I'M INCOHERENT AND TORN BETWEEN ALL GIGGLY AND HEARTBROKEN FOR A COMPLETELY DIFFERENT REASON THAN THE AWESOMENESS OF YOUR STORY!!!!

So... It's past midnight here and I have to wake up in mere few hours and I just had a devastating chat. Also, I type on my phone. So...sorry bb, if my comment is lacking appreciation toward this masterpiece of yours. But really, I enjoy it to the core ♥

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debsk August 27 2011, 15:06:21 UTC
I'm sorry you were kind of down when I posted it I know it has nothing to do with me, but being kind of down is always less nice than being kind of cheerful

Don't worry. I don't think I write smut as well as I would like, so I'm never happy with the results whenever I try and do it. But trying should help, really.

Thank you so much for reading Unnie ♥♥

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debsk August 26 2011, 16:21:47 UTC
Spot for mara_ciro

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mara_ciro August 28 2011, 09:54:00 UTC
Aside from things being literally HOT in there, I want to laugh at the irony of how Minho and Taemin can destroy or build a universe together. I like how despite the craziness of it all, there's a really strong connection between the boys. (We should all thank Yoochun and Jaejoong for making this happen)

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debsk August 28 2011, 16:02:36 UTC
^_^ Aren't Yoochun and Jaejoong geniuses?

I have a very particular way to see them. For me, they could destroy physical things, be rough with each other. But, at the same time, emotionally, I always thought they were soft and caring and more about creating than destroying.

Thank you so much for reading ♥♥

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the_night_thief August 27 2011, 01:09:38 UTC
It sounds so pretty. And EXPLOSIVE. But so pretty. x3
I want to be there to see this. For the colors, I assure you, totally not cause I'm a perv when it comes to 2min and this awesome universe of yours. >D

Also. I love how this is 998 words.

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debsk August 27 2011, 15:08:40 UTC
xDDDD

Their too powerful for their own good!

The colours are the best part of what happens inside that room. Minho and Taemin being naked has nothing on pretty colours xD

Thank you so much for commenting! I'm so glad you like the universe!!

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debsk August 27 2011, 15:10:33 UTC
Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

The scene could be a bit longer but alas, I don't like writing smut and one was enough for now!

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a_life_defiant August 27 2011, 17:14:32 UTC
*squirms* damn....*fans self*

beautiful but scorching hot description bb :D

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debsk August 28 2011, 16:02:57 UTC
Thank you so much for reading ^_^

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