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Fruition

Jun 13, 2008 22:55

Title: Fruition

Word count: 3742

Beta: Rugi

Rating: R ish

Characters: Neville and Hannah Longbottom, very, very small cameos by Ginny Potter, Ron, Rose and Hugo Weasley.

Summary: Neville and Hannah face a difficult time in their marriage.

Prompt: The greatest happiness of life is the conviction that we are loved - loved for ourselves, or rather, ( Read more... )

Comments 8

linda_lupos June 14 2008, 12:39:03 UTC

Oh wow. That brought tears to my eyes. :'( But in a good way.

I love Neville! And I think you wrote him very well. He's so sweet, aww.

Fruition vegablack62 June 14 2008, 16:16:30 UTC

I'm glad you liked the story and it brought tears to your eyes. That is the effect I wanted. I tried to make Neville an adult but still familiar from the books. I love Neville too.

kelleypen June 15 2008, 14:50:34 UTC

Fellow Neville lover here. This was beautiful. THank you so much for sharing it.

vegablack62 June 15 2008, 15:45:26 UTC

Thanks for your review. I wish there were more Neville stories to read.

midnight_rants June 15 2008, 15:55:02 UTC

Beautiful story that made me tear up. I enjoyed it throughly.

vegablack62 June 15 2008, 16:04:16 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.