I liked George in this story. He is a sober adult who has come through a lot and learned from it. He isn't the exuberant teenager he was at Hogwarts -- too much has happened to him. People are changed by experiences like George's, and you show that. I liked your depiction of Percy as over responsible, taking the blame for Fred's death. George, Hermione, and Percy made an interesting group for a late night meeting. I loved Percy's and George's conversation.
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