Sea Poem

[decarnin]

I've been writing on this long poem that doesn't have a real title yet, but the sections are called Tentacles, because I envision it as a sort of installation, each bit written on long thin tentacles hanging down, like those of a jellyfish, that you can walk among and read in any order you want. They're posted here in order of composition, more or

Comments

[vgqn]

I have a hard time reading poetry, but I think the concept of this is just marvelous! It would be a stupendous art installation at an aquarium. Very cool!

[decarnin]

Cool idea!

[lorelei633]

I can hear the water when I read this. Beautifully done.

[decarnin]

Thanks, hon! Really glad you liked it.

Nifty icon!

[her_raw_words]

wow...this is...epic. first of all, i love the concept...what a great way to extend and enhance the theme. second, i'm a sucker for the fusion of science and poetry...so many interesting words to choose from, and the depth of knowledge always amazes me...you've done this beautifully. finally, brilliant, vivid images!! i really enjoyed this.

[decarnin]

Wow, thank you! I'm really glad you liked the science stuff. Been reading biochemistry and yeah, the words just blew me away!