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Some days when Gakuto is feeling particularly mellow he pulls up a chair beside the kitchen door and waits for Oshitari to begin his nightly violin practice. The strains of the melody wail faintly through the gap between the floor and the door; Gakuto always makes sure to close it because he doesn’t want Yuushi to see him caring enough to

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[nyw]

Oshitari + Math genius = unbelievably sexy.

Oshitari + lollipop in his mouth = ahdsdijkflskdjalsdal;skakf

This fic = *_* I love them here. So much.

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thank you~ Oshitari is just alskjfalskjdfadfj-inducing in general everywhere *o*

[lyuna]

*___*
-hands her heart over-

Prompts, huh? -thinks-
* "At night Gakuto dreams..."
* Gakkun still believes in Santa, Yuushi found out
* Yuushi angsting over Gakkun pairing up with Hiyoshi

...yeah. >.>
Excuse the randomness :p

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thank you for reading <3 I hope you enjoyed it.

andandand thank you for prompts! I will do my best with them, but it will take time, I think >____< I hope you don't mind.

[a1y_puff]

Oh, I actually a little confused reading this (blame my limited vocab for that) but I can't stop reading till the end. and i like how you describe Yuushi, how his mind works, and his relationship with Gakuto. ^^

and also i love their more-than-friends-but-not-really relationship here (if I caught that correctly) <3

as for a prompt... hmmm.... how about "Lullaby"? :)

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oh I'm so glad you caught the right relationship vibe *flails* it was what I was trying for, but I wasn't sure if that would come across. I'll do my best with the prompt, thank you for reading this!~ ^_^

[a1y_puff]

w00ts! glad I caught it right x3
I love that kind of relationships <3
don't worry, it'll come across. it came across me, who's not really good with english, so it should come across to others too ^^

waiii~ u'll do the prompt? yay XD

[senshixdoukeshi]

I love your Gakuto in this, he's such a sassy little brat. ^_^ And all of the math analogies are quite intriguing. Thank you for showcasing both of their intelligences, I think people don't give Gakuto enough credit.

The fact that these are posted in pieces is actually refreshing, but then I have a fondness for snapshot fiction. I tend to think it gives a cute and curious look into the little things that make up their lives.

Oh and I love Oshitari's kissing equation and Gakuto's lollipop theft. ^_^ Very nice.

As for prompts: Chemistry class: it's one of their favorite subjects.

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thank you! I'm actually seriously bad at math, hee. YES I agree about Gakuto being reduced to being this whiney little brat all the time in fandom ): it makes me really sad.

Snapshot fiction... I haven't figured out if that's harder or easier to write than full length stuff, but I think I like it better.

AHA you have hit on another of the subjects I'm bad at, but I was thinking about trying to write them doing titration for a while, so thank you for reminding me :D LOVE THE ICON.

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[scorch66]

Loved how you wrote them as something in between friends and boyfriends & your insight into each character and their personalities was brilliant. Yuushi's math equations and Gakuto's need to be contrary was very cute and IC. Call me odd, but I liked how you used the word 'finicky' as well; I haven't read that in a while and it's such a fun word. As I've said before, your descriptions always amaze me and this piece didn't fail to meet my expectations. ;)

Prompts: 1) Gakuto is injured while performing his acrobats which leads to a conflict with Yuushi who wants him to stop using too many flashy moves (for Gakkun's safety, of course). 2) Gakuto & Hiyoshi start to get closer and Yuushi becomes jealous. 3) Dirty Pair meets Golden Pair; chaos ensues (at least in between Eiji & Gakuto) 4) Yuushi's new at school and is picked on by upperclassmen; Gakuto comes to his rescue (roles can be reversed)

Hope these gave you some inspiration. Have fun!;)

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hahaha I love 'finicky' it's such a... kitschy word. thank you for telling me they were IC, I'm always afraid that the way I perceive them is majorly off from their usual fandom selves, ie. snarky! Oshitari and bratty! Gakuto ):
(also: I am only pretending to know how math equations work, I don't in real life haha)

oooooooh I like 3) and 4). I will think about 2), because... I don't like Hiyoshi much lololol. He and Kabaji are the two Hyotei Regulars I never touch. Hm. But thank you for the inspiration~

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[scorch66]

Your welcome!:)

(I just thought of another crack!prompt: Yuushi sings 'Valentine Kiss' to Gakuto or simply Gakuto's thoughts on Yuushi singing 'Valentine Kiss' XD)