The Haunting of Hill House

[dedreamer]

Anyone who whines about my inability to use a comma every other word *coughMarlocough* ought to read The Haunting by Shirley Jackson. That woman hates to end a sentence

Comments

[merigold]

I got bored in the second line of that o.o

But comma are your friend!

And I've never heard Marlo whine in my life o.o about anything at all.

[fachefaucheux]

There's like...a comma continuum. There's using too few commas, then there's using too many. The key is to never go to either extreme. I tend to gravitate more towards the too many side, you to the too few. Need to get more towards the center, both of us. *sweatdrop*

[stormoomachu]

commas are overrated