Mad World

[dedreamer]

Don't remember the last time I updated, oh well. I'm supposed to be doing stuff for my Multi-genre project. I'm not even sure what stuff I just know i should be doing something. But instead I'm still reading those memoirs by the Russian author. And trying to figure out how to continue my Gordie story (which in my head I'm calling Two Dead Guys and

Comments

[fachefaucheux]

hmm...interesting start. I'd like to see where it's all going...plot's good, yes.

Two little grammar things I'm sure of, since I have no right to really pick at sentance structure-- "demon spawned" would be easier to read if it was "demon-spawned" and "bowel's" should be just "bowels".

Keep on keeping on, comrade! ^^

[dedreamer]

Whoops. Meh, this chapter is a pain in the butt. Yes I know this particular intro has nothing to do with anything.

thank you

[anonymous]

thank you, man