The One I Cannot Have

Dec 28, 2015 19:37

Life ... such a simple word as you look at it ... a 4 letter one at that. We surely have so many complicated words staring at us from the dictionary that could discombobulate even the most attentive of people. We even have complicated words with really simple meanings and ferhoodled phrases with no logical explanations that would help us expand ( Read more... )

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murielle December 29 2015, 07:20:06 UTC
What a beautiful reflection on love, and the giving of oneself, fully, to that love. How very fortunate, blessed, you are to have experienced such profound love.

I am sorry you didn't post this to idol, but I am so glad you chose to share it with us anyway. Thank you.

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dee_aar2 December 29 2015, 07:37:59 UTC
I am sorry too ... but no point looking back on that ... Thank you so much for dropping by to read ... I appreciate it and if the genuinity of it has touched you that makes me all the more glad.

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eternal_ot December 29 2015, 13:25:19 UTC
Ah! you too managed to put all the prompts together..:) Cool!..wonderfully written and only lucky few can experience soul enriching love..:)

The lines I liked the most were :
For all the multitude of intricacies that my life has belted out to me, I have very recently realised that it is life's smaller moments, those moments that are unexpected, sometimes light and mostly beautiful and other times heavy and painful which can actually be framed. Those extraordinary moments known only by the one experiencing them . In those moments perhaps and entire novel can be extracted. Those moments where we experience divinity amongst the mundane. Those moments that force us to take a panglossian view of life that perhaps after all .. everything does happen for the best.

Amazing snap once again!...and Darn! about missing the deadline...:/

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dee_aar2 December 30 2015, 09:07:17 UTC
Heyyy ... thank you for dropping by ... missing out on posting is driving me insane , what with the immunity too ... :) Well on a positive note glad you enjoyed the reading ...wondered if it was a tad too long ... couldn't stop once I started though :P

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halfshellvenus January 1 2016, 21:05:31 UTC
It is rare to find such a love, though to glimpse it and not truly be able to have it... is a unique sadness.

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dee_aar2 January 5 2016, 03:01:08 UTC
So glad you could drop by to read .... It is rare and I waited for so long before I found it . I agree with there being sadness in the picture ... but I do get more than a glimpse and the experience makes me feel the sadness is worth it .. somehow :)

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whipchick January 3 2016, 14:35:18 UTC
So beautiful to see that you have gained something worthwhile in your life, despite missing this connection. Very poetically written, too!

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dee_aar2 January 5 2016, 03:03:11 UTC
Thank you so much for dropping by to read .... Glad you could understand how much this relationship means to me ... Yes it is beautiful in every way possible ... And so glad you found it poetic ... I must believe then that it is well written :)

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