Last First Date

Feb 21, 2016 07:00

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rayaso February 21 2016, 22:47:37 UTC
These are Hall of Fame bad dates! It was fascinating to read. I kept wondering about the guys, "how on earth could you behave this way?" I hope 2016 brings a higher quality of dates.

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dee_aar2 February 27 2016, 05:51:15 UTC
Lolz ... this was purely fiction ... My mind just overworked on how bad could it really get .... Thank you for dropping by to read. Appreciate it.

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halfshellvenus February 22 2016, 06:29:41 UTC
I sure hope these are fictional, or at least mostly fictional!

There was a terrific variety of losers here-- trying too hard, mathlete, sleazebag, conversation hog, and bum. Wow. It makes staying single seem more appealing than trying to find someone.

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dee_aar2 February 27 2016, 05:56:11 UTC
Totally purely fictional. The guys were based on some jerks I have surely come across but most of them just possibilities of the worse kind of guys there could be. Truly dealing with men does give me moments where I believe staying single is way better. Thank you for dropping by. Appreciate it a lot.

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whipchick February 22 2016, 14:38:36 UTC
I really like the voice in this piece! Not sure how much is art and how much is life but this is a terrific character and I loved going on her hilariously horrible adventures!

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dee_aar2 February 27 2016, 05:57:33 UTC
Thank u so much. I liked the way the narrative turned out too. This is as much as hillarious as I could get. Hard work attempting it. Appreciate your feedback.

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bleodswean February 22 2016, 19:00:24 UTC
I really enjoyed this. Dating!!! I liked how you set up the piece, the months and men. And the conclusions you drew!

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dee_aar2 February 27 2016, 05:58:28 UTC
Thank u so much for your feedback. Glad it resonated with you. And double glad you noticed the conclusions.

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murielle February 22 2016, 22:24:20 UTC
Wow! So Mr. December isn't Mr. Right? He sounded so good, but so did Mr. Math guy.

Very entertaining, and educational. 😊

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dee_aar2 February 27 2016, 05:59:18 UTC
Mr December might still be ... but the after a series of horrible escapades one does tend to be wary. Thank you for dropping by :)

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