And then ....

[dee_aar2]

I promised myself I wouldn't love again

Comments

[eternal_ot]

Wow! I never knew you could do poetry so well :) Loved the imagery it creates with the shores, waves, ships and all. Superb last lines -

I knew he was my head
And then he had to turn heel.

Wonderful work! Great take on the prompt.

[dee_aar2]

I don't do poetry .... This was my first attempt ... and someone I knew asked me where are the rhymes. I am so glad the imagery worked for you. I just kept going with the flow.

[bleodswean]

Good cadence here with "and then". This is a sad piece but direct, the build-up works.

[dee_aar2]

Glad you liked it. This was my first attempt with some form of poetry and I couldn't come up with rhymes .. so I thought of repetition ... The first line with 'I', third line with 'It' and the the second and fourth with 'And Then ' ....

I am glad it worked. Thank you for dropping by ...

[m_malcontent]

This is splendid, but I hope mostly fiction.

[dee_aar2]

Thank you for dropping by ... some of it fiction ... :)

[magazhchi]

Beautiful! A nice take on the prompt.

[dee_aar2]

Thank you so much .... makes me happy to know the take on the prompt worked.

[rayaso]

The beginning was so romantic, but then the turn and another love lost. I hope this was not you.

[dee_aar2]

Thank you so much for dropping by. Life does turn unexpectedly. This does have many parts of me ...