Sometimes love is all you need ......

Feb 22, 2017 06:25

Diya opened her eyes , squinting , as the brilliance of the afternoon sun hits her glowing face turning it a pink shade that Albert so loved. She smiled, as he brought the book forward to block the rays that threatened to disturb her afternoon siesta. It was their favorite weekend routine. The garden bench, Albert reading out her favorite books as ( Read more... )

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eternal_ot February 23 2017, 08:00:04 UTC
I like the way you structured it. The back and forth timelines made it interesting :) Good to know they had a happy ending. Loved the First picture, it's mesmerizing. A nice take! Cheers!

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dee_aar2 February 27 2017, 04:35:08 UTC
Thank u so much for the words of appreciation. I had a tough time trying to get this sorted. Happy it worked for you. As for the first image ... I thought it was special too :)

Thanks a bunch for dropping by :)

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dmousey February 24 2017, 10:39:30 UTC
I liked how you told the story through a timeline. You can feel her sorrow in the last section. Thank you for penning. Hugs and peace~~~

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dee_aar2 February 27 2017, 04:36:06 UTC
For some reason I seem to be stuck on timelines these days. I am glad the sorrow did reach out.

Thank u for dropping by. I do appreciate it.

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murielle February 24 2017, 11:48:03 UTC
What an intriguing read! We start at the end, a wonderful end, and are wound back through time from the most joyous moment to the most devastating.

Some of your images are so strong, clear, and powerful. Wonderful read!

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dee_aar2 February 27 2017, 04:37:46 UTC
Thank you so much for the kind words. It makes me so happy that it worked for you. Photography is another hobby I am nurturing. Glad to know that caught your attention too.

Thank you for dropping by to read.

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baxaphobia February 24 2017, 14:35:51 UTC
A heartwrenching love story. I'm glad it was a happy ending and I liked the back and forth of this. Nicely done!

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dee_aar2 February 27 2017, 04:38:36 UTC
Thank u so much for dropping by to read :) Happy to know it worked for you :)

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rayaso February 24 2017, 21:24:49 UTC
I like the way you told this story, and the loving language that you used.

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dee_aar2 February 27 2017, 04:39:15 UTC
I just decided to get a bit mushy on this one. The mood for the week was such.

Thank u for dropping by to read.

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