No longer a dream

[dee_aar2]

Tanya was at her desk when she heard it. It was late and she wasn’t expecting anyone. She opened the door and walked out to the front porch. The garden was unnaturally lit up. She looked around and that’s when she saw the shadow move across in front of her.

She felt compelled to find out who it was today. Tanya followed the shadowy figure. She

Comments

[i_17bingo]

Tanya is a complex and fascinating character. I really enjoyed reading about her. I particularly enjoyed the ending.

[fodschwazzle]

Agreed, that does seem to happen. Could be a quirk of the sentence.

[dee_aar2]

Ooops that was an oversight .... a major one ...

[d0gs]

i really enjoyed the tone and atmosphere in this

[fodschwazzle]

I also liked how complicated Tanya is throughout--she yearns, but she doesn't always "need." Nicely done.

[magazhchi]

I really enjoyed this love story especially because of your strong and feisty female protagonist.