ahaha .. the plot is great .. ahaha .. it can even stand alone if there's no smut part .. but with that part ..this fic became more wonderful!!! .. good job there!!!
ahaha .. imagining Kyu to be a whiner is .. ahaha .. nostalgic? .. lels~! . it's the opposite .. it's really funny and al .. in a good way .. actually, while reading your fic .. i kept on laughing .. imagining how everything goes .. ahaha .. good thing you put that plot because it's really wonderful .. in the world of fluff .. there's only few plot which are really nteresting :))
p.s.: i hope wook didn't forget sungmin's cake lels .. ahaha kidding .. i know jongwoon already clouded his mind .. but i sensed some angst lying in your story . maybe you can work with that as well (im an angst writer and lover actually .. specially those heartbreaking endings ahaha) :))
I think Kyu literally has a big mouth... cause he does. It's huge. xD Yeah, I don't think he's whiny.. (was he whiny here? o.0) but he's much more fun to write as a brat. I also think Ryeowook in this story would rather miss a few hours of sleep than break a promise... Sungmin's cake was very tasty, tyvm.
There is a sad and a happy way to end this one-shot:
Sad way: Wookie resigned and left. He broke his promise along with Jongwoon's heart, cause he said he wouldn't leave him... -heartbreak- don't choose sad way cause it's SAD
Happy way: They had some more sex, Ryeowook persuaded Jongwoon to actually start taking his meds, Jongwoon stopped having his creepy tortoise hallucinations cause you can be relatively normal if you take your meds (although he still stayed a weirdo...), and now YeWook are happily married -nodnod-
CLAIMING A SPOT OMFGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I have no way of commenting rn but i just read it and DAMNIT GIRL THIS IS HILARIOUS! :'DDDD i think i kinda love you for this now :D
So you aren't spooked by the fact I took my first bias and made him a schizo, my second bias and made him... sorta slutty I suppose, then took my (probably false, after writing this) belief that YeWook can't be anything but platonic with puppies and kittens and turned it into a kink? Mmmm fail!smut... ;)
PERFECT! Ugh! So HOT! is it really your frat fic? Cuz they way you write is absolutely well done you describe thinks perfectly and the smut is really good! I love YeWookthnk you so much! Will you jeep it up? I'll be looking forward to the next part! Fighting!
Aww I'm glad you liked it <3 Nah, this isn't really my first fic, but it is my first K-Pop fic, my first fic in years AND my first fic that is above PG-13 cause I could never be bothered... Ummm... I'm not sure if this could be more than a stand-alone. Not in the short while that's for sure... -sigh-
So I love BBQ in this! He's a wonderfully awkward nerd, and you got his "I could care less" personality down! And QMi!!! I think Jongwoon should have stayed a little when he saw QMi together, though...just saying.
I'm not a huge fan of YeWook, but this is so weirdly fantastic, I may change my mind. I love what goes on in Wookie's mind. He's too cute. And Jongwoon!!! Why is he so great?
I think this is pretty cool, even if you don't think so. I mean, mental patients seeing turtles and having sex with unassuming nurses...what could be more hilariously charming? LOVE!
I'm glad you liked this. I just wasn't really sure how to write YeWook... but I had to, for the sake of my K.R.Y bias... and when unsure, crack makes things work! xD /bricked to death I think I ship YeWook waaaaay more after writing this. 0_0
Hehe I think Jongwoon stayed for a bit... just cause the clarity with which I can imagine voyeur!Yesung is pretty disturbing. I guess QMi were too busy to acknowledge him though, and he didn't wanna intrude cause... you know, he had a horny Wookie to find. xD
Horny Ryeowook was really fun to write, I must admit. I secretly believe he's not as innocent as he used to look. And whipped-in-his-own-way Yesung (the turtle had approved, after all) was fun too. Kyu wouldn't let me proceed with the YeWook until I inserted him though, then he just demanded I randomly get him laid... -sigh of doom-
In my world, Jongwoon would've been invited in on the great QMi sex. I'm sure Wookie could go, too. Or Wookie could find Henry and Sungmin...or maybe Han Geng. That'd be pretty hot!
I think this is really cool. I'm not that funny, so I think crack would seem like some awkward rant with one-liners no one understood. However, I do appreciate those who can pull it off well, like you!
My favorite part of this is when Jongwoon takes some necessary "equipment" from Kyuhyun the nerd's backpack. It's so great!!! And Kyu should always get laid...or fed. I love fat!Kyu from predebut!
xD Lmao! So I take it you're very much into OT3's... or 4's... or huge band-some's? Omg HenWook -melts- MinWook -melts further down- and... HanWook? That's sort of unusual, but not in a bad way. Sort of interesting, actually. Lol.
Mmm... it's okay, I can't pull off anything serious, and angst is sort of impossible to get outta me. I think about writing angst and go all... why would I do this to them, poor babies?! *tear*
Kyu should be woken up in the middle of the night and fed when he's all sleepy and grumpy and spitting insults every which way! Just cause he'd be too precious like that. <3 BBKyu ate my brain, I'm telling you.
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Never thought of this kind of plot!
And the sex are HOT!!
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Tnx <3
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Thank you *hugs* =)
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p.s.: i hope wook didn't forget sungmin's cake lels .. ahaha kidding .. i know jongwoon already clouded his mind .. but i sensed some angst lying in your story . maybe you can work with that as well (im an angst writer and lover actually .. specially those heartbreaking endings ahaha) :))
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I also think Ryeowook in this story would rather miss a few hours of sleep than break a promise... Sungmin's cake was very tasty, tyvm.
There is a sad and a happy way to end this one-shot:
Sad way: Wookie resigned and left. He broke his promise along with Jongwoon's heart, cause he said he wouldn't leave him... -heartbreak- don't choose sad way cause it's SAD
Happy way: They had some more sex, Ryeowook persuaded Jongwoon to actually start taking his meds, Jongwoon stopped having his creepy tortoise hallucinations cause you can be relatively normal if you take your meds (although he still stayed a weirdo...), and now YeWook are happily married -nodnod-
So choose whatever LoL
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Nah, this isn't really my first fic, but it is my first K-Pop fic, my first fic in years AND my first fic that is above PG-13 cause I could never be bothered... Ummm... I'm not sure if this could be more than a stand-alone. Not in the short while that's for sure... -sigh-
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I'm not a huge fan of YeWook, but this is so weirdly fantastic, I may change my mind. I love what goes on in Wookie's mind. He's too cute. And Jongwoon!!! Why is he so great?
I think this is pretty cool, even if you don't think so. I mean, mental patients seeing turtles and having sex with unassuming nurses...what could be more hilariously charming? LOVE!
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I think I ship YeWook waaaaay more after writing this. 0_0
Hehe I think Jongwoon stayed for a bit... just cause the clarity with which I can imagine voyeur!Yesung is pretty disturbing. I guess QMi were too busy to acknowledge him though, and he didn't wanna intrude cause... you know, he had a horny Wookie to find. xD
Horny Ryeowook was really fun to write, I must admit. I secretly believe he's not as innocent as he used to look. And whipped-in-his-own-way Yesung (the turtle had approved, after all) was fun too. Kyu wouldn't let me proceed with the YeWook until I inserted him though, then he just demanded I randomly get him laid... -sigh of doom-
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I think this is really cool. I'm not that funny, so I think crack would seem like some awkward rant with one-liners no one understood. However, I do appreciate those who can pull it off well, like you!
My favorite part of this is when Jongwoon takes some necessary "equipment" from Kyuhyun the nerd's backpack. It's so great!!! And Kyu should always get laid...or fed. I love fat!Kyu from predebut!
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Mmm... it's okay, I can't pull off anything serious, and angst is sort of impossible to get outta me. I think about writing angst and go all... why would I do this to them, poor babies?! *tear*
Kyu should be woken up in the middle of the night and fed when he's all sleepy and grumpy and spitting insults every which way! Just cause he'd be too precious like that. <3 BBKyu ate my brain, I'm telling you.
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