X-Men Fic: 'Intrusion' (1/1) NC-17

[deep_salt_water]

Title: 'Intrusion' (1/1)
Fandom: X-Men (Movie)
Author: deep_salt_water
Pairing/Character: Rogue/Victor
Disclaimer: The X-Men aren’t mine; they belong to Marvel and 20th Century Fox.
Word Count: 1149
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Rogue sneaks into Victor's room.
Placement: Somewhere in the comicverse after Victor's joined the folks at the mansion.
Spoilers

Comments

[skybluerae]

Mmmm yummy! Good stuff. And no worries, you got Creed right. Just the right amount of smug and mean. I have a feeling his anger is subdued when getting laid anyway ;)

[deep_salt_water]

Yay! I got it right! Woo!

:wipes brow: Phew.

So, um, is it your birthday? Cos if so, feel free to lay a request on me, too. I like fulfilling people's birthday wishes (or cravings!)if I can!

And Happy Birthday.

[skybluerae]

Thank you.

Oooo, birthday request huh? Hmmm. I think I'm just pleased you're going to write a little more fanfic (as per your poll from the other day). But I love your Ryro fic where Logan was there in a "catching them at it" capacity - that was hot. I love jealous Logan.

But you've got lots on your plate - so only if you're looking for a ficlet break idea...I suggest a 'Logan catches some Ryro action and is insanely jealous yet doesn't go away'. :) *nods* HOT

[deep_salt_water]

Now, that - I can certainly do! Your wish is my command.

And you know what - I'm always pleased to be writing jealous!Logan intruding on the Ryro 'verse. It's evil of me, but damn good fun.

[dakashy]

Very nice, thank you.

[deep_salt_water]

You're welcomoe, glad you like it.

[citrinesoul]

I'm rapidly becoming a smut addict in all forms. I'd blame you, only i'm enjoying it too much.

only thing, i think this is a typo, "It wasn’t until she was at the foot of the bed that he her know he was aware of her intrusion." would it not be "It wasn’t until she was at the foot of the bed that he was aware of her intrusion." ?

[deep_salt_water]

Well, Jenn doesn't call me SQS for nothing so you being a smut addict is something I can handle the blame for.

And there was a typo, but not like you thought! I'd just left out the word 'let'. He was always aware of her. He just hadn't LET her know he knew yet ;)

[laenwyn]

thank you so much *hugs* =) I agree with Sky, and you know since I've already had a sneak peek at the fic-I-know-I-shouldn't-mention *g* I wasn't the least bit worried =)

[deep_salt_water]

You liked it! WOOOOOOOOOO!

And I don't know. This was harder than writing for the you-know-what fic... I couldn't quite work it out. I actually had a much different version but wasn't terribly happy with it.

Anyway, Happy Birthday again!

[dulcesweet]

wow, loved the smut, there isn't much on rogue and creed but what I've I read is great. would love to read more about those two.