100 Situations - Rogue/Pyro T2 Prompt #15: Early

[deep_salt_water]

Title: Unfold (5/?)
Fandom: X-Men (Movie)
Pairing/Character: Rogue/Pyro
Prompt: #15 - Early
Word Count: 1069
Rating: R
Summary: Rogue and John are former lovers, meeting again after years apart. Can he convince her to join the X-Men?
A/N: The X-Men aren't mine; they belong to Marvel and 20th Century Fox

Comments

[sendthewolves]

Woah, the way you write these two together so so damn hot! I look forward to reading more of this.

[deep_salt_water]

Thanks very much, I hope you continue to enjoy it.

[spfizz]

Awww...poor widdle Pywo. You just want to coddle him, I swear.

On thing: "She stroked his face with her gloved hand, dipping her head brush her lips against his."

Shouldn't it be, "...dipping her head to brush her lips against his."?

Other than that, someone's been busy, haven't they? Sheesh, you're on a roll, woman. Nice.
;)

[deep_salt_water]

Erm... yes, there should be a 'to'. Damn!

Same way, you probably meant 'one' thing, yeah? ;)

Glad you like it. I wanted to try something a little different.

[spfizz]

Goddamnit.

One. One, one, one, one, one. See? I can spell it, I really can. Gah! *keels over*

...I need bed. Now. *crawls under covers*
;)

[deep_salt_water]

Cry? Oh no! (woooooooooo, my job here is done!)

[bklyangel]

I'm a tad confused. What did Rogue do that Pyro doesn't trust her?
Overall very nice chapter.

[deep_salt_water]

I haven't said what it is yet. I'm being deliberately mysterious until we get back into the past again.

Cheers for the fb.

[angelswingicons]

:(

This is so bitter sweet and I wanna know what happened and what's gonna happen next...