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Four Seasons - Spring

Mar 05, 2011 17:35

Title : Spring
Author : deepintotaem
Pairing : Onew/Key
Rating : G
genre : AU, drama, romance
disclaimer : unfortunately i just own the plot :'(
summary : Jinki had a feeling toward his childhood friend, and he manage his plan to get his childhood friend's - Kim Kibum - heart back and make him only look at Jinki. not as anyone not childhood friend- but ( Read more... )

pairing : onkey, rating : g, fanfic

Comments 20

deepintotaem March 5 2011, 10:36:59 UTC

spot for slickcaffeine and jinkiwhisper :D

slickcaffeine March 5 2011, 15:50:24 UTC

woah !

kibum wasn't deserve to have parents like that honey ;_; let jinki shows his love to him to makes Kibummie feel cherish soon ! omona ~

deepintotaem March 10 2011, 10:35:11 UTC

i believe you know the next chap's plot -_- but i have some surprise in there xD ( though i know it won't surprised you ~ ) lol

deepintotaem March 5 2011, 10:37:55 UTC

spot for my unnie rinni1905

rinni1905 March 6 2011, 08:44:29 UTC

Ah, this chap is so beautiful that it hurts. Poor Kibum, he didn't deserve to be treated that way, just run away from home into Dubu's arms. But I think Kibum had too much attaches with his family to let them go, and Jinki absolutely didn't show anything for him that Jinki would protect and treasure him forever. You silly, Lee Jinki.

I love this so much, a little too complicated in some part but you did a good job in general and I couldn't find anything to criticize since the fic is so good. I love this and please update soon, dear~

deepintotaem March 10 2011, 10:34:11 UTC

glad i can make this fic more better. hope the next chaps won't disappoint you.

thanks for reading :D

deepintotaem March 5 2011, 10:38:54 UTC

spot for neneksihir and heenoona :D

neneksihir March 11 2011, 20:13:32 UTC

ooohhh i'm such a bad eonnie...i just opened lJ...btw this is interesting...as always...i'll run to next season...

deepintotaem March 5 2011, 10:39:22 UTC

spot for choon_hee and illuminationkey

omiichan March 5 2011, 10:55:14 UTC

spot >w<~~

omiichan March 5 2011, 11:09:04 UTC

there's no typos i think and what~ ur english is better than me >.<~!!

liking like always~ even though i feel this a little bit shorter?? but better than nothing~ xDD

love how u describe their room >w<~~

you still have one more exam day?? fighting ^^~ just a little bit more~

deepintotaem March 10 2011, 10:32:52 UTC

do you think so? :o your english's good too, dear :D
my description about the room... actually i want to have a room like that but unfortunately i dont ~ lol

thanks for your support :D and thanks for reading *kiss* ~