Because...

Apr 06, 2011 02:27


Title: Because... (one-off/drabble)
Author: deepseabed
Pairing: Belldom
Rating: 15
Warnings: Angst. Sexual references.
Summary: It started because...
Disclaimer: It's all fantasy. It happens only in my dreams.
Beta: Chantal. Thank you so much. :)
Feedback: Anything will be loved. ♥

I'm back. I wish I could have written something sweet. Anyway, I hope you like ( Read more... )

belldom, fiction

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sheerpoetry April 6 2011, 05:25:28 UTC
Oh.

Yeah, I'm gone. *sniffles*

This is gorgeous! I'd pick out parts, but I'd just quote the whole thing.

Although:
Can you imagine how frightened I was when I found you eyeing me in daylight? Still naked. With curious, grey eyes.
Dom's eyes. And this is just...so cute, on both sides. <3

Lovely!

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deepseabed April 6 2011, 10:00:05 UTC
I'm really glad you felt that way. Thank you. <3
I love sweet stories, but sometimes I really feel the need to write/read angst stories...

And the part you mentioned was my favourite, too. :)
Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

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deepseabed April 7 2011, 16:24:07 UTC
I'm glad you felt that way. Thank you. <3

Oh, thank you! I think I'm still behind, but I hope I'm more visible soon. *hugs*

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starlight_myth April 6 2011, 11:53:01 UTC
As always, you blow me away with your writing! This was nothing less than spectacular!

o wash your scent away. To remove your invisible fingerprints from my skin.

I loved those lines. They are so simple and yet they mean so much!

I know now why homosexuality has to be outlawed. It could be the first step towards the end of the world.

Whoa oh! That was mighty deep, Minami! And gorgeous! I guess that's a way of saying a man and man relationship is completely different from a man and woman. Especially when it involves two people who so very close to each other.

This was extremely beautiful! I'm glad you're writing again!

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deepseabed April 7 2011, 16:34:13 UTC
Those parts you've quoted are my favourite, too. I'm glad you liked them. :)

When I write love between a man and a man, I want something intense. And thinking about Matt and Dom... Their love should be more special, because they're really close to each other.

Thank you so much. ♥

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deepseabed April 7 2011, 16:35:22 UTC
Thank you so much. I'm really glad you liked this. :)

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engel_sehnsucht April 6 2011, 20:34:26 UTC
Just... so, so gorgeous. <3

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deepseabed April 7 2011, 16:36:30 UTC
Thank you! I'm really glad you liked this. <3

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