The Day After The Revelation

Feb 18, 2013 17:54


Title: The Day After The Revelation (one-off)
Author: deepseabed
Pairing: Belldom
Rating: 15
Warnings: Angst. Sexual references. Girlfriends.
Summary: He daren't do it.
Disclaimer: It's all fantasy. It happens only in my dreams.
Feedback: Anything will be loved. ♥

I feel as if I were a newcommer, since I haven't posted anythng for ages. I hope you like this ( Read more... )

belldom, fiction

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millionstar February 18 2013, 13:08:14 UTC
It's beautiful. <3 You have a way with words that I have always admired, this was gorgeous!

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deepseabed February 20 2013, 06:19:48 UTC
Awww, thank you! It means a lot, D. ♥ I always write in a rather haphazard way, and wait for some emotion to take me over. So, until I finish, I usually don't know what words and story will be there.

(I love your picture! My favourite parts of him are his back, the back of his head, arms and fingers, I think. <3)

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aka_demon72 February 18 2013, 16:37:01 UTC
Wow, this was so emotional. I loved it, and Dom's voice was just so real.

Do you mind if I add you as a friend? =D

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deepseabed February 20 2013, 06:25:30 UTC
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. ♥ I'm really, really glad to hear that you felt that way. I've always wanted my story to be realistic.

No, not at all, please do! :D

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thekeyholder February 18 2013, 19:57:23 UTC
Oh Minami, this was so delicate and subtle! I'm so glad you posted it, it's beautiful!

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deepseabed February 20 2013, 06:31:37 UTC
You know, I always want some space between the lines for my readers to fill in. And want them to imagine in their hearts freely. So I usually try not to explain too much. It seems I've managed it. :)

Thank you so much! ♥

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applehead9 February 22 2013, 16:50:43 UTC
This was absolutely beautiful! <33

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deepseabed February 22 2013, 17:11:10 UTC
I'm really glad you felt that way! :) Thank you so much for reading and commenting. ♥

(By the way, your icon caught my attention, and I visited your profile page. Are you learning Chinese and Japanese? I'm Japanese. :))

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applehead9 February 22 2013, 17:24:08 UTC
Aww really? That's sooo cool!
Yeah, I've been studying Chinese for almost 2 years now and started learning Japanese just last year too. Sooo tough but I just love it so much. :)

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deepseabed February 23 2013, 04:08:51 UTC
:)

I can imagine how hard it would be to study Japanese as a foreign language. If it weren't my mother tongue, I don't think I could have managed it...

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muse_manticore February 23 2013, 20:41:26 UTC
So lovely. Welcome back love xxx

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deepseabed February 24 2013, 16:57:06 UTC
I'm so glad you liked this. :) Thank you so much for reading and commenting. ♥

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