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[deepshades]

(((This poem is for anyone who has ever looked out a window at night a bit sad and thought about their past and somehow ended up finding a truly happy memory and tries to stay in it for however long they can, regardless of the fact that its not the now

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[lunshea]

That's a different feeling than what you usually post. It's beautiful. Memories are treasured that way and you captured it. Bravo.

[deepshades]

Thanks :D

[peachykitty]

It's funny that you should write about wanting to be in the past, you never realize what you have until it is gone. I find myself longing to be back in my past at times...longing for the sensations I would feel by just a voice, but although the past is sweet, the future is brighter because you can't change the past, but you can shape your future ;)

Escape With Me
Follow me to where the sun meets the Earth
Live your life to its fullest worth
Attraction, abstraction, reaction to my world
Do you honestly believe that you can handle this girl?
Entangle me and mangle me into what you want
Come away with me my dear, please don’t taunt
Tell me your secrets and I’ll tell you mine
Take my hand, to you I promise to be kind
Be my inspiration in the very air I breathe
Be the very sensation that allows me to be
Runaway with me and let us watch our future shape
Indulge in me as I will in you and we shall make our escape
By: Katherine Rose Ramon

See? That could be the future :P So Remember the past, but loook forward to the future :)

[deepshades]

very nice work...

I've seen to many girls hurt by to many guys...

Come to think of it.. maybe the girls only get hurt because they hurt the guys first.

who knows...

Romance is sweet and beautiful when untainted...

[anonymous]

ooh i liked that! very nice!

[deepshades]

yaay! my favorite small-furry-animal-consumer!