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Mar 03, 2009 03:44

OK, so its been a while, but my love, my life, my muse is at it again. So, I had to add my two cents to the current ongoing story.

Fandom: City of Villains
Characters: Deepstryker, Harrly
Word Count: 972
Warnings: None really, just one little slip

I continue from Shewolfe's story here
The Date

To The Rescue )

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mimerki March 3 2009, 15:25:11 UTC
I've been following this from shewolfe and laridian's LJs and just needed to say that this was brilliantly done. :)

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deepstryker March 4 2009, 05:16:20 UTC
Thanks. Wanted to make sure that everything was explained appropriately, without giving too much away. Got to try to maintain the balance between being too obvious and too subtle.

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amaryssobellus March 3 2009, 18:01:54 UTC
Very nicely done. Stryker thinks it's Simaster that ruined Harrly's perfect date. Oh, no. This can not end well.

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deepstryker March 4 2009, 16:54:53 UTC
Hopefully it won't go too far. Stryker has been expecting something to happen, but lack of intel and a quick temper can lead to 'bad things' happening.

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seidoo_ryuu March 3 2009, 19:19:24 UTC
Hee, and here Simaster thought he was finally off the hook! XD

Nicely done, and I rather like that Stryker and Atratus have wildly different opinions, when it comes to working in the rain. :P

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deepstryker March 4 2009, 05:11:52 UTC
Well, since you mentioned how much Atratus hated the rain, I just had to tweak your nose about it a little. Though Stryker really does love the rain, the fog, and the dark.

Like they say in the army,

"If it Ain't Rainin', it Ain't Trainin'!"
HooYah

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iceraptoress March 3 2009, 20:04:12 UTC
Whoops. Well, Simaster's going to be in for a surprise, isn't he? Still, it's endearing how devoted Stryker is to Harrly.

And naturally, my inner Shade is going "Get 'em Stryker!" XD

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deepstryker March 4 2009, 16:48:53 UTC
Thanks.

I hope I can reign him in before things go too far. Shade has a vicious sense of humor, but Stryker has a vicious sense of ...vengence/justice(?). Especially about the few things he truly cares about.

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kin_thalas March 4 2009, 04:56:59 UTC
Oops, Stryker obviously got the wrong idea, this cannot be good...
Well done!

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deepstryker March 4 2009, 05:12:57 UTC
Well, Stryker has been looking for an excuse anyway.

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