[For baeksthighs] Dear You

Jan 06, 2016 19:49

Title: Dear You
For: baeksthighs
Pairing: Luhan/Lay
Rating: PG-13
Length: 3,216 words
Warning: Anxiety disorder and implied depression
Summary: es·cape; an act of breaking free from confinement or control
Author's Note: I want so badly to just continue writing this little au forever, but alas, time. I hope you enjoy this, dear <3

Dear You )

pairing: luhan/lay, 2015/2016, rating: pg-13

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baeksthighs January 6 2016, 16:49:17 UTC
okay oh my gosdhgfuhfdf wait i need a second

First of all, BLESS YOU FOR WRITING THIS IM SCREAMING. Seriously, this is exactly what I wanted and the way you describe Luhan's anxiety is so spot on and the way that Yixing is characterized is my favorite thing ever I think. Like him pulling Luhan out of his shell in all of these crazy ways had me giddy throughout the whole fic.

AND YIXING TELLING HIM THAT HE WAS CUTE SO MUCH MADE MY HEART FLUTTER BYE

"You're so cute," Yixing says, and Lu Han wonders how many times he's heard that today. a million, Luhan, you've heard it a million oh my god

And the part where Yixing takes him to his little place gave me butterflies fwoeijf bc in my head i was like 'oh frick this'll be THE part won't it' and I felt like it should be considered a special thing since it was something Yixing doesn't show to other people oh man I'm such a mess rn layhan is so precious

He can be anxious tomorrow, and maybe he'll learn why Yixing is so sad. Maybe. this is like the perfect ending that makes me want more ( ... )

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fairyminseok January 13 2016, 15:27:07 UTC
I'm so glad you loved it!!!!

I wanted to write and write and write more and i may do so <3 These two would have amazing little adventures as they get to know each other better ;;;

THANK YOU!!!

Ps; I miss you! and I think we lost touch? and I got so excited to get you as a participant you should follow my twitter @/kittyseoks so we could catch up? :3 maybe?:3

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nyu_96 January 7 2016, 21:57:39 UTC

Wow I really love this. I really loved how you pictured the characters they seem polar opposite but at the same time similar. It felt like I was like Luhan, just dragged but Yixing and the story and wherever it went without asking why or thinking too much. It was very pleasant in that way. I really liked it so I wish it would have been longer haha. Thanks for writing and sharing this !

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karilein January 9 2016, 20:51:58 UTC
This was beautiful. I'm as curious as Luhan what's up with Yixing's sadness.
Ah, I would've loved this story to be longer but it's still great.

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