[For mayangel7] All We Do Is Drive

Jan 07, 2016 23:47

Title: All We Do Is Drive
For: mayangel7
Pairing: Luhan/D.O.
Rating: PG-13
Length: 5,100 words
Summary: And this is, realistically speaking, their very last week together.
Author's Note: i know the highest rating you requested was r but i’m totally willing to write you porn if you want it ;), this fic is lowkey (highkey) inspired by halsey’s “drive”

All We Do Is Drive )

pairing: luhan/d.o., 2015/2016, rating: pg-13

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aceofalmonds January 8 2016, 04:20:17 UTC
Oh my God. This was just so mysterious and ethereal and passionate, bittersweet, wistful, and SEXY.

God it was so good. Not only was it beautifully written (I love your writing style) with an awesome choice of vocabulary, but I was able to relate to so many things you referred to, especially college life and that sort of awkward, unspoken homosexual attraction between a friend that has grown a bit too close. All topped off with an ending without closure, also with words unspoken.

To top it all off, this was with one of my favourite OTPs, Hansoo.

Author-nim, I love you for writing this, thank you for a wonderful read.

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oneforyourfire January 20 2016, 10:51:13 UTC
ahhhhh thank you ;;

this was my first time writing hansoo, but they're so intriguing tbh
so quiet and hesitant and soft and shy with one another and so bad with words but still so full of feelings

thanks for reading and thanks for letting me know

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daylighreverie January 8 2016, 05:22:23 UTC
I enjoyed this so much omg. It feels quick but slow at the same time like I can't explain it. The build up of their feelings I also really like and the ending though, the ending makes my chest so full of emotions. Like I can feel what they're feeling and Kyungsoo's maybe-tears oh my god. This is not the most coherent comment, I know, but know that I really really enjoyed this.

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oneforyourfire January 20 2016, 12:08:55 UTC
ahhh thank you for reading it and for liking it ;;
and yeah, hansoo feel so quiet and bumbling and hesitant and suddenly abrupt just because they have all these feelings and they just kinda spill forth and then retreat
hesitant babies otp, a first for me, but so very good to write

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fairyminseok January 9 2016, 00:47:14 UTC
This is gorgeous ;;; you captured the beauty and quiet of hansoo so well and tbh i kind of teared up a little ;;;

Your words are beautiful and they're beautiful <3

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oneforyourfire January 20 2016, 10:51:52 UTC
this is a very big compliment coming from you
thank you for giving it a chance, my dear friend ;;

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anonymous January 9 2016, 19:43:26 UTC
this made me feel things. especially near the end
It felt like kiss 20 and 22 were only yesterday and now we're here...HanSoo really works like that.
thank you for sharing ugh it's so beautiful ;; xo

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oneforyourfire January 20 2016, 12:51:37 UTC
they're just so hesitant and slow and then sudden and abrupt, it's the nerves and how anxious and skittish they are around one another when it comes to feelings, i think

but this was honestly a really interesting otp to write
they are so different from other pairings ive written but i really like them

thanks for reading and thank you for liking it and thank you for letting me know :))

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karilein January 9 2016, 22:02:37 UTC
This was so beautiful. I like how the both of them worked as characters.
The build up to the last night, the kissing, was really well made.
I'm a bit surprised how well this pairing works altogether anyway.
I don't think I've ever read a fic about them before DoD but they can be so beautiful together...
Thanks for writing this lovely piece <3

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oneforyourfire January 20 2016, 12:54:45 UTC
i've never read a fic for them either, but they work really well i realized after writing this
soft, hesitant, skittish, full of feelings boy but who suck at works and have to speak with actions and kiss a bunch on their last night together
they're definitely a potential otp after this tbh

thanks for reading and thank you for commenting, i really appreciate it ;;

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