Did You Hear of the Story About the Tornado? There Is a Twist at the End. (for infadel_x)

[defpepimod]

Title: Did You Hear of the Story About the Tornado? There Is a Twist at the End.
Recipient: infadel_x
Rating: PG
Word Count: 5.5k
Warning(s): none
Summary: They say it is supposed to be red. Red as an apple. Red as blood. Red as the cheeks of a shy first love. It isn’t supposed to be pink, so when someone asks Jaebum nods and says. “Of course I see it. Of

Comments

[hipployta]

Jinyoung jumping through worlds for Jaebum...I imagine that first meeting was quite the shock

[candyd1ve]

I think or at least that's how I imagined it more than the shock is that Jinyoung really can't say anything about himself, or at least nothing too revealing...
anyway!! thank you!!

[candyd1ve]

thank you! I'm happy you liked it!
☆*:.｡. o(≧▽≦)o .｡.:*☆

[electricdino]

This was such a good read. Such an interesting take on the red string of fate concept. I really enjoyed reading it. It was so compelling that I was sad when I reached the end of it. XD

[candyd1ve]

thank you!! (｀・ω・´)”
and thank you also for your nice fic (─‿‿─) I enjoyed it lots!

[infadel_x]

Screaming because I gave such a simple prompt and you turned it into... this!

The hint of magical realism and the warm but pulsing tone of the story made it resonates much better than what I had in mind with the prompt. A thread stretching through two worlds is one of the best ideas I have heard so far.

It tugs and pinches and burns, keeping him awake for hours on end, staring at his ceiling with a deep ache in his bones that goes way beyond the exhaustion.
I would like to interpret this as Jinyoung trying to reach out to Jaebum and ouch, my heart.

“It’s… ” he begins to say, but there is sound of steps coming up the stairs and Jaebum recognizes Jackson humming ‘The eye of the tiger’.
Jackson pls. You're perfect please continue to do you and never change. (I love your characterization of him)

They talk and Jaebum finds himself saying more than he would be comfortable to share with someone he barely knows*muffled screaming in the distance about how JJ are soulmates as I fall into a pit of feels

[candyd1ve]

YES that was Jinyoung thank you!! I was going to put that into the notes, but forgot, bout you noticed!

I'm so glad you liked it because I rewrote this differently three times with totally different plot lines and then Jinyoung just turned into... that and I wasn't sure...

Also 'storm baby', I'll forever think about this Jinyoung as such from now on ಥ_ಥ

thank you again!!!!!

[kashchanocchi]

The plot is really interesting, I was wondering why the red string was actually pink in this fic hahah (but now I know)

All these stories are so good like wow I wish they didn't have to end :\

Good job though, thanks for the nice read!

[candyd1ve]

thank you!!! (O ▽ O)
I'm happy you liked it!! i'm so full of exclamation marks tonight it's ridiculous