All the Wants (All the Needs) [for xfragments]

May 19, 2015 09:29

Title: All the Wants (All the Needs)
Recipient: xfragments
Rating: R
Word Count: 4K
Warning(s): Alcohol use, vague story lines
Summary: Jaebum hates this - being half drunk near the back of a bar after what can barely be called a gig. They play for half an hour and are forgotten in half a minute, the moment the next band takes the stage.
A/N: Your prompts ( Read more... )

year: 2015, rating: r, length: under 5k

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kashchanocchi May 22 2015, 15:43:33 UTC

After re-reading this I'm pretty impressed with the plot and the implementation of flashbacks! I wish I had a little more insight of what happened in the past just a bit more but it's okay, I'm pretty sure it was intended this way to be a bit vague.

Nice characterization!

oh no jinyoung smoking :(

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shrdmdnssftw May 30 2015, 13:24:54 UTC
thank you for reading this (twice!), and for liking it enough to comment. haha, it was meant to be pretty vague but at the same time, hopefully the emotions that came through were enough to make up for the lack of details :) again, thanks for commenting!

I'm :( at Jinyoung smoking too tbh

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candyd1ve May 29 2015, 12:33:43 UTC
rock bands au with all this angsttt they always get me ಥ_ಥ
it was a pleasure reading this, thank you!

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shrdmdnssftw May 30 2015, 13:25:43 UTC
thank you for reading it and taking the time to comment! I am such a sucker for writing (and reading) band AUs so this prompt called my name, haha - I'm hoping I did it justice :)

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