Defeated Lovely

[defeated_lovely]

W00T!!!! POEMMMMMM!!!!

I FINALLY wrote a new poem! And it's about my name... -blink- oh well...

Defeated Lovely

She walks around with face held high,
Feet on the ground, but head in the sky.
So wonderfully bright, and no one knows why -
   She's the defeated lovely.

She's fallen hard, but still she stands,
Seeing far -to distant lands.
No one can guess her

Comments

[flamingoleander]

Very nice! ^^ I can imagine this being a song though. My mind always works in musical ways though. Nice job on this...it's like your theme song now!

Hey Pose it's skerd

[sb_hitthelights]

I read this poem in school! Wonderful stuff!! I think it's my favorite poem ever in all honesty...we should memorize this instead of stuff like the rainy day or god give us men....
Ciao, Skerd