Overdue - Pete/Patrick

Jun 09, 2011 20:56

I bring you fic! Written for fall_out_nurse and josiemus_prime.  Beta'd by the very very lovely vinvy! Thank you sweetie!

Title: Overdue
Author:  Defect_no9
Rating:  Pg-13
Warnings: Slight Pete/Patrick. Mentions of attempted suicide. Ativan Fic.
Patrick is the last one to arrive at the hospital )

bandom, fall out boy, fic

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justtothesea June 10 2011, 12:15:09 UTC
Oh, the imagery is so sharp and beautiful, you painted the room so vividly I could almost smell that sterile hospital smell. And your Patrick in this was just stunning, how he felt for the situation and Pete. They were both heartbreaking.

I love this so, so much ♥! can you tell?

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defect_no9 June 10 2011, 12:24:45 UTC
Thank you very much! ♥ I was listening to "What Sarah Said" from Death Cab for Cutie on repeat like a crazy person. Who does that to themselves?! /o\ lol Thanks again! :D

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sydneysconverse June 10 2011, 16:15:12 UTC
ohh, you make me want to cry and feel hopeful at the same time, hon.

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defect_no9 June 10 2011, 16:52:58 UTC
Mission accomplished! :D Poor Pete and Patrick. This story was written about hope, and knowing that you aren't alone. I'm very happy to have been able to conveyed those kinds of feelings in it! Thank you! ♥

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pinkomilk June 10 2011, 19:59:19 UTC
heartbreaking but so freaking beautiful. You can just feel how lost they all are. Love this!

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defect_no9 June 10 2011, 22:28:14 UTC
Thank you very much!!! ♥

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fall_out_nurse June 11 2011, 00:07:37 UTC
*tackle hugs you*
I LOVE IT!!!!!! ♥

It's so awesome I can see it all so clearly and ugh I want to hug them both and hold Patrick's hand telling him Pete will be okay, and to tell Pete we'll help him fix himself, you have played my emotions and nursing needs well my dear :)

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defect_no9 June 11 2011, 00:10:42 UTC
I LOOOOOOOOVE YOU TOO!!! I wrote this very specifically for you for FANFIC THURSDAY! (because I kept promising you over and over and totally forgeting -_-) I'm so happy that you love this darling, and I will gladly accept tackle hugs any day of the week!

I know right? Patrick be strong for Pete! He is not alone! Ahhhh I imagine it exactly like this. *HEAD CANON IS THE ONLY CANON*

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