between the couch cushions - demi/selena.

Aug 18, 2009 14:22



title: between the couch cushions
rating: pg
pairing: demi/selena. lovez. <3
disclaimer: No ownership here; I'm just having some fun. No, I'm not writing a factual documentary or anything. Whatever. You know. x]
summary: It follows soon after the whole Trace/Demi debacle, although it only makes vague references. So if you didn't see anything from ( Read more... )

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tashamiller2k August 19 2009, 09:45:52 UTC
Really sweet and beautiful fic, I really like the way you've described everything, their relationship and Selena's blurted epiphany.

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definexfreedom August 19 2009, 16:00:38 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it. =)

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lymtics12 August 19 2009, 13:33:10 UTC
“I’ve been in love with you since I was at least six.”

“Demi,” she says, half-rolling her eyes, half-grinning back so wide she almost doesn’t know what to do with herself, “you didn’t even know me when you were six.”

“That’s what you think.”

Favourite bit ever <3 Loved it

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definexfreedom August 19 2009, 16:01:34 UTC
Aww, thank you! ♥
Apparently that's a popular part? I'm glad I put it in there. *g*

THANK YOU FOR COMMENTING~

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orangesided August 20 2009, 10:17:31 UTC
I loved thisss. So tender and well-written. I have to say I loved the puzzle piece between the couch cushions metaphor-type thing. Brilliant. And of course loved the "I've been in love with you since I was at least six." line =]

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definexfreedom August 21 2009, 20:20:25 UTC
Yay, thank you! =)
I'm so glad you enjoyed it, seriously!

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xxalynaj August 20 2009, 20:01:26 UTC
“Demi,” she says, half-rolling her eyes, half-grinning back so wide she almost doesn’t know what to do with herself, “you didn’t even know me when you were six.”

“That’s what you think.”

it's official. cutest.line.EVER. <3

i loved this. it made me smile. :) you're a great writer. :D

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definexfreedom August 21 2009, 20:21:50 UTC
♥ THANK YOU!

I really don't know what else to say; I'm just kind of amazed that people liked it.

falkjdlkjd thanks for commenting! It made me smile.

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gellar1408 August 21 2009, 18:16:21 UTC
“You’re here! How did you-you-what-you’re here!”
But then she can’t hold it in anymore and Demi’s kicking lightly at her foot and all she can say is, “I’m here!” (Because apparently Demi’s eloquent statements are contagious.)
These two lines made me lol.
I loved them.
But I especially loved the ending statement,
it was perfect.
Amazing job! :]
I adored this.

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definexfreedom August 21 2009, 20:23:27 UTC
Thank you thank you thank you! <3
This stuff might actually start going to my head or something, man~
I'm so happy to hear you enjoyed it.

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