the difference between further and farther is you...

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i got a telescope so i can see you from the stars, floating in the fields of smiles and whispers... when your show your teeth your cheeks crack like a spiderweb in spring. take me to the ocean so i can say my goodbyes. i'll yell across the sea and let the waves carry my message. can you hear me? can you hear the strain in my lungs? the pain in my

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[devilworshipper]

Hey wuts up, if you're an artist then you would love feedback from people like me right? someone who just recently read your journal entry. WEll i just read it and you are really not that great and need to improve much more. You are probably just starting out though so its ok. I even am a fan of the whole artsy/deep/meandering genre so i pretty much know what im talking about. Well anyways hit me up when you get better. In the mean time..keep practicing.

-T2