"Coming to Terms" - Hobbs/Raydor and Rusty Fic

Dec 29, 2013 17:18

Title: Coming to Terms
Pairing: Hobbs/Raydor, Rusty Beck
Rating: T
Word Count: 2, 586 words
Disclaimer: Not my characters or television show.
A/N: Written for skillwithaquill for the 2nd annual holiday gift exchange at majorcrimes. Of her very generous list of prompts I've included: Sharon/Andrea, Rusty and Sharon, argument/make-up, and a dash of fluff.
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andrea hobbs, hobbs/raydor, raydor and rusty, fanfic, sharon raydor, rusty beck, major crimes

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newnumbertwo December 29 2013, 23:08:10 UTC
Oh, I love this! So much beautiful angst and concern for Rusty. And then the way they talk about it at dinner. You brought out momma bear!Raydor, which always makes me happy - target practice indeed.

Love the final scene. Andrea knows all the right things to say and do.

Gorgeous.

♥ ♥ ♥

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defyingnormalcy December 29 2013, 23:24:22 UTC
Why thank you! It was a lot of fun to write this simply because skillwithaquill gave me so many options to work with. I hoped that you'd specifically enjoy Mamma bear!Sharon, also protective!Andrea.

Thanks for reading. :)

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lanalucy December 30 2013, 00:59:14 UTC
I love the sweet moment that ends this. Almost brutal honesty followed by careful negotiations.

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defyingnormalcy December 30 2013, 01:10:05 UTC
I had to end this with a sweet moment so that they could reconnect. The lovely lady wanted some fluff so I had to deliver, even in a small quantity.

Thank you for reading. :)

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skillwithaquill December 30 2013, 02:10:30 UTC
Ahhhh it's so perfect! *melts*

I love that Sharon and Andrea talk through their frustrations in the moment. It keeps the argument from escalating and helps them both get on the same page. Everyone had their hearts in the right place - Rusty included. Of course he would want his foster mothers not to worry, but that's impossible when they're both in protective mode. :)

The ending is so sweet. Andrea soothing Sharon to sleep is so adorable and loving and kind. The grocery discussion is really cute too. Oh, my heart. <3

Thank you for such a lovely story! :D

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defyingnormalcy December 30 2013, 03:41:10 UTC
I am so glad that you enjoyed this. I definitely could imagine Andrea and Sharon having an argument about Rusty's safety, I totally get the sense that they are ultra protective of their loved ones. I'm relieved that the fluffy bits of backstory about their domestic life together worked for you. Thanks for the awesome prompts, it was a pleasure writing this for you.

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kairos7 December 30 2013, 06:55:20 UTC
Seconded on the grocery discussion. However, without a more sensible second party, I kind of have two coffee machines and six types of coffee, plus the coffee machine I use at work and the coffee that I didn't bring in there. Andrea can come have coffee with me any time!

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defyingnormalcy December 30 2013, 06:57:10 UTC
I also have two espresso/cappuccino machines, a Tassimo, and a regular coffee maker. Hobbs can split her time between your place and mine. ;)

Thanks for reading.

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surena_13 January 2 2014, 19:14:37 UTC
A little late with my comment, but still I wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed this fic! It was very in character and something that could have come straight from the show. Their interactions are wonderful and just perfect.

The ending made me all warm and fuzsy inside. Thank you for sharing this!

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defyingnormalcy January 2 2014, 19:17:05 UTC
It was very in character and something that could have come straight from the show.

That is something that I really strived to achieve so I am thrilled that you enjoyed the fic and that you felt that it could have easily slipped into the series canon.

Thanks for reading. :)

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