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defyingnormalcy

"Secrets Kept" - Hobbs/Raydor Fic

Dec 28, 2014 20:06

Title: Secrets Kept
Recipient: kairos7
Pairing: Andrea Hobbs/Sharon Raydor, mentions of past Sharon Raydor/Jackson Raydor
Rating: T
Word Count: 1, 484 words
Disclaimer: Not my characters or television show
Summary: Andrea’s thumb gently traced the top of Sharon’s hand. “You did what you had to, to keep your kids safe,” she reasoned. “It was a hard ( Read more... )

andrea hobbs, hobbs/raydor, fanfic, sharon raydor, major crimes

Comments 8

lanalucy December 29 2014, 02:26:50 UTC

A great moment between the two of them - not perfect, but just right.

defyingnormalcy December 30 2014, 16:51:17 UTC

Thank you so much for reading! :)

obsessive_a101 December 30 2014, 00:16:44 UTC

*melts into a puddly-puddle of feels*

I - I think this is a wonderful moment between the two of them - and in-character for them both and for Sharon to be able to discern that a secret's being kept (and what it is in nature) but cautious and careful about prying, and I like Andrea's way of voicing it - taking into consideration both sides (of "to tell or not to tell"), which, honestly, is a much better way to handle the entire dilemma than the show itself did with Rusty... tbh. I feel like there was a lot of context that was misplaced in their push for Rusty's (hard-earned, admittedly) pov. :3

*whispers* Also to add onto lana’s comment above - I do love - and it IS very fitting for them - that there’s no clean, neat resolution to this, because that’s life - and there are no neat, easy answers sometimes - especially within complicated family dynamics. As Rusty has discovered having become part of this family.

Anyway, just! ♥ Thank goodness for that ending. It made ME giggle. :D ♥ ♥ ♥

defyingnormalcy December 30 2014, 16:52:04 UTC

Thank your for your super thoughtful comment! I'm thrilled that you enjoyed this so much, thank you! :)

newnumbertwo December 30 2014, 23:07:21 UTC

I'm so glad you tackled this storyline. Of course she knows when something is off with her kids. And that it has something to do with Jack. Andrea is perfect here. And I'm glad they'll have their holiday before tackling reality. Lovely.

♥

defyingnormalcy January 4 2015, 22:24:34 UTC

Thanks so much for reading! :)

kairos7 December 31 2014, 04:01:53 UTC

First of all, thank you. I was so moved, both by the story and that you did this. As one of your regular readers, and as a rather inarticulate person, that keeps coming out as, "I'm, just, thank you..." but I can't keep delaying commenting because I'm stuck, so I'm going to try to muddle through the rest of my reaction ( ... )

defyingnormalcy January 4 2015, 22:24:05 UTC

...you two can come inside now too." Was there a time that they felt they couldn't, while she was still married, or does that mean come in like everyone else? "Too" is the alternative to... I'm not sure if it's clear what I'm asking. However, I'm over-analyzing one sentence that's probably perfectly clear to people with a clearer sense of syntax than I have. (I'm trying to keep the question from looking like a criticism, as clearly, I just don't understand how to communicate in my own first language. LOL)

Meaning that Sharon would have decorated the inside of her condo with mistletoe as well, seeing as she is so into decorating. :)

I'm really glad that you enjoyed this, it was a pleasure writing it for you. I hope that you had a lovely holiday! :)