"Das Feuer Eos" - Kapitel 7

[killer_ameise]

Endlich fertig! Bitteschön.
Ich habe noch nie so lange an einer Bettszene gesessen, also wehe, sie gefällt euch nicht! XD

Titel: "Das Feuer Eos" - Kapitel 7
Rating: NC-17
Sprache: Deutsch
Zusamm'fassung: Tattoos, Wahrheiten, Lügen und schmutzige Handlungen im nussbaumhölzernen Schlafzimmer...

- Prolog - Kapitel 1 - Kapitel 2 - Kapitel 3 - Kapitel

Comments

[gothikmaus]

Noooo, my colleagues want to go to lunch RIGHT NOW. T_T I'll have to wait to read this... *sob*

[killer_ameise]

*lol*
enjoy your food. ;)

[gothikmaus]

*drip drip drip*

Sorry, that's my brain dripping all over the place. Oh my God, I loved this chapter. Not only for the sex scene, but for the intensity of Bela and Jon's feelings: Bela not wanting to lie anymore, Jon being unsure and afraid but wanting to have everything, spoilt child that he is.

This was wonderful. Sigh.

And speaking of something else entirely, I was quite amused by this sentence:

Solltet ihr etwas finden, das euch spanisch vorkommt, sagt bitte Bescheid.

Spanisch? Really? In Italian we say Arabic. (And in English it's Greek, isn't it? Man, I'm such a language geek, bear with me.)

[killer_ameise]

In Spanish, it's Chinese. Actually, you can say that in German, too ("kommt mir chinesisch vor"), but Spanish is more frequent.
Weirdly enough, the Dutch don't have a saying like that, I think. I might ask my dad later.

I'm glad you like the chapter :)

[gothikmaus]

Now that I think about it, in Milanese dialect we say "That's German to me." XD

This chapter was so beautiful I could cry. T_T

[killer_ameise]

Aww... Don't cry. You know I'm a sap, right? So... erm, I won't promise a happy end, but I do promise more sweet moments. ;)

[schonste]

AHA I HAVE TO WAIT TOO BUT NSTEAD I READ LIKE HALF AND HOW I FEEL LIKE CRYING WITH SWEETNESS. But now I have to go to work and will read it there like a good girl, since no one will be able to understand. XD

[killer_ameise]

I thought your working-language was German? ;)

But, erm, yeah, have fun reading it.
Glad you like the first part.

Why am I making everyone cry with this?? XD

[schonste]

Haha no, it's just an asset that I know German since the president is Austrian and we do business with Austria sometimes. I doubt I'll ever really use it, but oh well.

I am probably blushing super hard right now. This is great! I wanted to cry 'cause Bela is so full of "oh god I am a liar and a bad person, oh god" and Jon is so trusting and desperately in love. It's fantastic. Plus their little get together was all hot and steamy.

[killer_ameise]

Careful with the blushing, or your co-workers might think you have a problem with high blood pressure. XD

I'm super-glad you all like it, btw.
Bela doesn't think he's a bad person (because he considers "bad" as "good", mostly), but he DOES feel his conscience for the first time in quite a while. About time.
Also, I'm not sure Jon's as trusting as he says he is. He just desperately WANTS to trust Bela, which doesn't actually mean he completely does.

[killer_ameise]

*lol*
I'll do my best to be quicker in writing the next chapter.
Glad you like it. :)

[angrylogic]

You just set my monitor ablaze with sex overdose >_<

[killer_ameise]

LOL... I love the sketch.
Hope your monitor found some sexual relief. XD

I'm glad you like it.
Of course Farin's messed up. Growing up rich wasn't that easy back then, especially if you are sent off to boarding school and probably got caned for reading too many exotic books or for looking at the other boys too much. Also, Farin's one of the guys who always kind of want what they can't have - in my mind at least. ;)
Bela has got a huge confused boner. I hope he can hide it from Rod, but I don't think so. Rod is far too smart for that. Oooh, the drama! XD

[schonste]

Hope your monitor found some sexual relief. XD

LOL.

[angrylogic]

My room is a sticky mess now D: