Comments | dejavu_love: Five.

dejavu_love

Five.

Nov 22, 2011 22:31

( Slave contracts or not, it didn't matter. )

Comments 11

cassaria November 22 2011, 23:21:53 UTC

/sobs
All I know is that whatever the situation is like in real life, I hope none of them are going through the turmoil that the Changmin you portrayed here is going through. But this was very well written and it definitely splintered my heart. Write more happy DBSK? :P

dejavu_love November 23 2011, 08:07:56 UTC

splintered your heart? oh goodness. haha.. i'll try writing more but im quite out of touch with this fandom to be honest.. haha.. but i'll definitely keep the option (more) open from now. =)

whatifgirl86 November 22 2011, 23:33:57 UTC

Wow this was very nicely written. The way that we could see what Changmin is going through was just flawless. Liked the whole concept of 'five'

I enjoyed reading this:D

dejavu_love November 23 2011, 08:08:21 UTC

thanks so much! =) im really glad you liked it!

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dejavu_love November 23 2011, 11:49:40 UTC

i know right! =(

mangoquirks November 23 2011, 08:49:19 UTC

고마워 친구 <3

We know how complicated and multifaceted human feelings are and we tend to go back and forth and back again; but I really liked how you chose just one aspect and expanded on that. Perhaps Changmin really has felt this way at one point since it happened. He seems like one who has a black & white mindset with no grey areas.

:D suggestion: more of this! From the other four too.

Saw this (http://fuckyeahtohoshinki.tumblr.com/post/13133961515/something-is-amiss) awhile ago and thought: You don't say...

:)

dejavu_love November 23 2011, 11:48:48 UTC

haha.. yup. he seems stubborn like that. SO ADORBS. i think this is kinda why i like him most. he seems so.. human compared to the rest of them. his awkwardness, his voice cracking.. all that nonsense. OH AWKWARD BOY HOW I LOVE YOU SO.

and chingoo yah! don't get me started on the other 4 POVs! it usually spirals out of control, like what happened for what i previously intended to be a one-shot. which became a series. oh tian. ALL THE BEST FOR EXAMS CHINGOO! =D

mangoquirks November 26 2011, 04:51:37 UTC

hehe why not? <3 i'll read them!

and thanks!!!! Mnday will come soon :))

mangoquirks November 26 2011, 04:52:17 UTC

of course, i am horrible for making a typo. Monday!

championmugger November 23 2011, 11:57:57 UTC

It's so...sad. D:

But I like it. It gives a whole different perspective to the situation I guess. Simple but great job there. /gives cookie.

dejavu_love November 23 2011, 18:05:42 UTC

haha.. thank you! I'm glad you liked it! /grabs cookie (not too eagerly or greedily of course) and noms it happily